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[Guest33]

Really nice one ,,,,i wrote sumthing abit similar to this 4-5 mths ago in hindi,,,i never posted tht though

fer laro post ...nale kithe rehne ho ajj kal madam shakal dikha dea karo.....

 

[Guest33]

nice nice nice

 

[Angel_Eyes]

bahut hi nek salah ditti hai, te poem vi bahut sohni likhi hai h

 

[Guest33]

bahut hi nek salah ditti hai, te poem vi bahut sohni likhi hai h

oye putt salah ditti gai mallomalli aah pehla para taan bhumika lai likhna pia.....nahi main nahi si likhna.........h

 

[Guest33]

hmmmm.....bas aiven kise dian harkatan dekh ji thoda aukha si..... kehna ki si kuch likhta....

 

[MaRjAnA]

Bahut good e...
Eh Lina Mere Walo Genie Nu

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

bhene good one n


per main te kujh vi nai kita
tusi te mere te poem hee likh maari

 

[Guest33]

bhene good one n


per main te kujh vi nai kita
tusi te mere te poem hee likh maari

not u....u r gem of a person.......tuhade naal taan i doubt kade naraaz hoi sakdi haan.......naraaz hun vi ni haan kise naal bas dunia te hairaan haan ki kaisi kaisi hai......

 

[StReeT_FiGhTeR]

aye haye main sadke jawa teri poem de ...bahut ghaint a bhuaaaaa....teri taan book kadni i paini a hun .. very nice

 

[Angel_Eyes]

bahut sohna likheya bhuaa.....vakai kuj loka nu dosti de shayad maine (meanings) hi nahi pata hunde, mainu apne naal vapreya ik kissa yaad aa gaya, kissa ki poore 2 saal bhaina vaang rahi main te akheerle din mainu ajeeb jehiya galla suna ke paraya kar ditta..........i know it hurts par banda keh vi ki sakda, i think we can only learn from these kinda dosts and pray to god ki kade sade kolo kise de naal eda na hove !

 

[Guest33]

bahut sohna likheya bhuaa.....vakai kuj loka nu dosti de shayad maine (meanings) hi nahi pata hunde, mainu apne naal vapreya ik kissa yaad aa gaya, kissa ki poore 2 saal bhaina vaang rahi main te akheerle din mainu ajeeb jehiya galla suna ke paraya kar ditta..........i know it hurts par banda keh vi ki sakda, i think we can only learn from these kinda dosts and pray to god ki kade sade kolo kise de naal eda na hove !

koi na kehna taan main v kise nu kuch ni....par janta kith etakk sochdi hai ih dekh ke hairaan haan........apaan taan aisi gal nu thokar maar uada daida.......par it does hurt!!!!

 

[Angel_Eyes]

koi na kehna taan main v kise nu kuch ni....par janta kith etakk sochdi hai ih dekh ke hairaan haan........apaan taan aisi gal nu thokar maar uada daida.......par it does hurt!!!!

i know bhuaa, kite na kite ta it does hurt..........but no worries apni thokar maar ke udaan vaali aadat bahut vadhiya hai.........baki mainu dasso kinne ki keha, hune Osama nu bula de banda uda dende aa, aidi vi ki gal sadi bhua nu koi kuj keh jave

 

[Niki_Grewal]

nice one

 

[Guest33]

i know bhuaa, kite na kite ta it does hurt..........but no worries apni thokar maar ke udaan vaali aadat bahut vadhiya hai.........baki mainu dasso kinne ki keha, hune Osama nu bula de banda uda dende aa, aidi vi ki gal sadi bhua nu koi kuj keh jave

problem is janta kuch kehndi ni na....bas kardi hai chalaakian ih soch ki ihna nu kehda pata laggna...chalo hun taan raat gai baat gai...oh kahawat hai na "takke di handi gai kutte di jaat pachani gai"....hor tusi suano.....

 

[Guest33]

nice one

thanku nikki........






















kya karu control nahi hua....tikhi......

 

[Angel_Eyes]

problem is janta kuch kehndi ni na....bas kardi hai chalaakian ih soch ki ihna nu kehda pata laggna...chalo hun taan raat gai baat gai...oh kahawat hai na "takke di handi gai kutte di jaat pachani gai"....hor tusi suano.....

bas vadhiya bhuaa challi janda......janta nu aahi prob aa bina kuj kahe chlakiyaa mardi, mere mummy kehnde hunde bhi eho jehe lok chup chaap sab kar jande ne dooje nu bevkoof samjhde ne, par sacha banda fer bol hi painda te jado o bolda o moonho bura ban janda......par tuhada tareeka bahut vadhiya ......chakk ke poem hi likhti.........

 

[Guest33]

bas vadhiya bhuaa challi janda......janta nu aahi prob aa bina kuj kahe chlakiyaa mardi, mere mummy kehnde hunde bhi eho jehe lok chup chaap sab kar jande ne dooje nu bevkoof samjhde ne, par sacha banda fer bol hi painda te jado o bolda o moonho bura ban janda......par tuhada tareeka bahut vadhiya ......chakk ke poem hi likhti.........

sahi kiha......dil di gal nikalgi....bas hor ki chaida....dmaag ch gubb gabaar taan ni riha....

 

[Niki_Grewal]

thanku nikki........






















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[~~*nUnnY*~~]

and the best part is tusi apni feelings nu kihne sohne words ch paronde ho...its really an art....te rahi gal selfish frds di...ethe menu vi ik takri ..mera vi dil bhaut dukhaya ohne... ..chalo chado ...tusi sunao...tuhanu ph kitta si kuch din pehlaan...missed cal mili meri??

 

[Guest33]

.. and the best part is tusi apni feelings nu kihne sohne words ch paronde ho...its really an art....te rahi gal selfish frds di...ethe menu vi ik takri ..mera vi dil bhaut dukhaya ohne... ..chalo chado ...tusi sunao...tuhanu ph kitta si kuch din pehlaan...missed cal mili meri??

oh aaho mili si jad nu main dekhia bahut late si...t efer mainu zukam jihia ho gia...main iha ki fatian baans banke gal karni...kudi nu hasauna vi taan hai fer......