x!~x! MY POEMS!x~!x~

[Guest33]

bro galti meinte chedha peya si usnu,

sandhu saab ne uhh sade.

aayi samajh nale is thread ch gah na pa...jithe dekho shuru ho janda.....

 

[Guest33]

oh kaka uyin dmaag de ghaode dadaun di lod ni koi mamla gadbad ni te na ho sakda......samjhe.....sada taan sada jado toon gal karni shuru kiti hai 36is da aankda riha....

 

[Guest33]

hahahhahaaa

 

[J@tti]

touching

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

 

[Angel_Eyes]

main main nahi bas tu hi tu hai........vaah bhuaa bahut sohna likheya, tusi ta likhde likhde khudaayi jitt laini hai.........

 

[MeHRaM]

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sohni aa....keep it up... tan ke main apna poetry padan da shauk poora karda raha !!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[prakash_kaur]

wah ji wah ithe aashiq te shayar bade ne.......
sadi hi kami si asin vi aa gaye cineworld wale......DEOLS ROCK

 

[Guest33]

Yaad.............

 

[Angel_Eyes]

Yaad

bhuaa poem ta awesome hai, par mainu dar lag janda eh parke, ki dassa hun !....
par jis tareeke naal tusi akhar piroye ne beautiful hai

 

[Guest33]

bhuaa poem ta awesome hai, par mainu dar lag janda eh parke, ki dassa hun !....
par jis tareeke naal tusi akhar piroye ne beautiful hai

.....maharaj sab bhali karu...take everyday as it comes and live as if there is no tommorrow.........make max. of today

 

[Angel_Eyes]

.....maharaj sab bhali karu...take everyday as it comes and live as if there is no tommorrow.........make max. of today

thank ju hai bhua ji, tuhadi ditti salah te hi chalna theek hai, bazurg theek hi kehnde ne .........par poem poori ghaint hai

 

[Guest33]

thank ju hai bhua ji, tuhadi ditti salah te hi chalna theek hai, bazurg theek hi kehnde ne .........par poem poori ghaint hai

thanku putt.......padhai likhai wall dhiyan deo...

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

bhene very nice
i luv it

 

[MeHRaM]

wah ji wah ithe aashiq te shayar bade ne.......
sadi hi kami si asin vi aa gaye cineworld wale......DEOLS ROCK

beeba kyon parkash kaur nu badnaam kardi aa.... oh kehde passeon cineworld waali hogi.......kehdi film ch ayeen o tussi ?????.....parkaash kaur tan bechari housewife aa.........................................................hannn poet ta mainu v badde dikhde aa par koi ashiq najjar ni aya ????

 

[Guest33]

beeba kyon parkash kaur nu badnaam kardi aa.... oh kehde passeon cineworld waali hogi.......kehdi film ch ayeen o tussi ?????.....parkaash kaur tan bechari housewife aa.........................................................hannn poet ta mainu v badde dikhde aa par koi ashiq najjar ni aya ????

well aah prakash kaur da jawab ohi dau aashiq vi bathere ne akhan thodiankhullian rakhnia pendian.....

 

[Niki_Grewal]

Really nice one ,,,,i wrote sumthing abit similar to this 4-5 mths ago in hindi,,,i never posted tht though

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

Really nice one ,,,,i wrote sumthing abit similar to this 4-5 mths ago in hindi,,,i never posted tht though

fer post kar dio gh
asi vi pard laie

 

[J@tti]

Yaad-
09-03-06

Beautiful

 

[Rolly]

toooo gud, just loved it