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neil said:
dabur da chananparkash :wink khaya kar
poori taran ee rogmukt ho jaan tain fer:an



appan poori tara hi rog mukat haan...........chananparkarsh ya chawanprakash khaan di lod ni ........:wink :wink
 

Sandhu

Sandhu Jatt
Great work , actually main ve ek vari ehi thought la ke poem likhan di koshish kiti se. Par main 2 lines toon aage likh hi nahi sakiya. Kyonki es bare likhan lai ek eho jiha experience chahida hai jo har kisi kol nahi hunda. Really i don'thave words. Really amazing. Plz keep it up. mainu es toon bahut kuch sikhan nu miliya. thanx for that
 

Maxsteel

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mast_malang_munda said:
nice poetry

maxsteel panga na lei yar

inna sohna likheya jatti ne

dont discourage her


dnt worry ,,,uhh nahi hundi discourge.meri ladoo bhua haii.:kh :kh :dan :dan :dan
 

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Sandhu said:
Great work , actually main ve ek vari ehi thought la ke poem likhan di koshish kiti se. Par main 2 lines toon aage likh hi nahi sakiya. Kyonki es bare likhan lai ek eho jiha experience chahida hai jo har kisi kol nahi hunda. Really i don'thave words. Really amazing. Plz keep it up. mainu es toon bahut kuch sikhan nu miliya. thanx for that

thanks bhaji for the halla sheri I'll try...vaise tusi kehde thought di gal kar rahe ho ithe....bahli tareef larti tusi..... main kadekade likh dinni haan vaise dukhi ni hundi........
 

Sandhu

Sandhu Jatt
Babal............

Babal har pal tera laad
Mainu bada satavnda
Tera pyaar nal "katrru" te "laado" kehna
Mainu pal pal yaad aavnda......


Eh thoughts kamliye..... vase udas hoke likhan di lood nahi hundi hai. aapa khush rah ke ve likh sakde haan. bas experience hoona chahida hai har situation da. i am really happy tu aapne thought nu poem di shape bade sohne tarike naal dendi hai. Keep it up.
 

Maxsteel

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jatti_sydney said:
thanks bhaji for the halla sheri I'll try...vaise tusi kehde thought di gal kar rahe ho ithe....bahli tareef larti tusi.....oh te main kadekade dukhi hoi likh dinni haan vaise dukhi ghat hi hunni haan........


lol sandhu saab eve likho ,,,dhukhi jayada kardi haanrolf rolf rolf rolf
 

Sandhu

Sandhu Jatt
Ehne ki kisi nu dukhi karna, her thoughts are really very pure and sweet, plz observe her thoughts.
 

Maxsteel

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Sandhu said:
Ehne ki kisi nu dukhi karna, her thoughts are really very pure and sweet, plz observe her thoughts.



bro galti naam usda naam v haii meinte chedha peya si usnu,

sandhu saab ne uhh sade.:an :an :an
 

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Maxsteel said:
lol sandhu saab eve likho ,,,dhukhi jayada kardi haanrolf rolf rolf rolf

aaho ik tu hi reh gaya si dunia ch jis nu main dukhi karna.......ih muh te masoor di daal.....chappdi ch muh dho ke aa:squint
 
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