x!~x! MY POEMS!x~!x~

[Guest33]

s sachi dostan layi wahla pyaar aa mere dil ch bi.. bhaven kayi dost matlabi kyon na hon s

dostaan di dosti ne mareyan... sanu te chaldi jawani ne mareya

:D:D but fikar not... eho jahe dost bi someday will appreciate your friendship... bhaven oh admit karan chahe naa... lub ju kaddu

wub ju Tori...fer kad challdi mere naal Cofffee lai.....

 

[~~*nUnnY*~~]

oh aaho mili si jad nu main dekhia bahut late si...t efer mainu zukam jihia ho gia...main iha ki fatian baans banke gal karni...kudi nu hasauna vi taan hai fer......

Apna khyaal rakho ji Get wel soon...at

 

[Guest33]

Pardes.......
aina v bura ni...

 

[Angel_Eyes]

bahut sohna likheya, and as u said shayad bura eh pardes nahi, bura eh hai ki apne nahi aithe, te jithe apne hon o jagah ta aape chungi laggan lag paindi, baki jithe jamme pale hoyiye, khed ke din bitaye hon, o jagah hamesha swarg hundi...........your poem is awesome, just as G Mann has said, Lakh pardesi hoyiye vich............bura eh vi nahi te o vi nahi, bas kami apneya di hai

 

[Some1]

bau sohna likheya te bau sacha likheya

s s s s s

 

[Some1]

s s s s

awesomee

 

[Some1]

we think alike or wat

 

[Some1]

s s s s s s s hayee

 

[Some1]

s s s s s

i Smitten all ur poems

 

[Guest33]

bahut sohna likheya, and as u said shayad bura eh pardes nahi, bura eh hai ki apne nahi aithe, te jithe apne hon o jagah ta aape chungi laggan lag paindi, baki jithe jamme pale hoyiye, khed ke din bitaye hon, o jagah hamesha swarg hundi...........your poem is awesome, just as G Mann has said, Lakh pardesi hoyiye vich............bura eh vi nahi te o vi nahi, bas kami apneya di hai

Thanku Angelo.....I know thats the reality apne jad hunde ne naal taan kite marji reh lao....

 

[Guest33]

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[Some1]

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[Guest33]

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senti na hovo Jay.....

thanku

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

s s s s s s s nn nn nn nn nn

 

[Guest33]

s s s s s s s nn nn nn nn nn nn

Janta Janam din te vi udaas hai........oh biba khush hovo khush....

 

[Some1]

senti na hovo Jay.....

thanku

mood hi ehoja

 

[Guest33]

mood hi ehoja

ICE cream khao......
Chocolate khao...
Shake shook pio...

fer dekho mood kime arbi ghode vangu bhajda........

 

[Guest33]

mood hi ehoja

MOOD kaisa fella Capri......

 

[Niki_Grewal]

awwwwwww...nice one

 

[J@tti]

well written