~*!*~My Poems~*!*~

[Niki_Grewal]

its awesome nikki...sachi really nice a ...i am luck that i read it first ..hehehhehe

lols,,,,,yep lucky tusi garam garam jalebi khadi hove jidhan,,,hehe,,,thanx for ur patience u knew i was writing it n u were waiting ,,,,thanx alotttttt ramin,,,,isse chhakker ch likhi gai,,,nahi taan viche reh jaani si

 

[J@tti]

it's sweet & touching

 

[Niki_Grewal]

IshQ

Ishq di kimant barri hai uchhii,
Eh Pak mohabbat taan,
Rabb de naa wang hai suchhiiii.

es ishq 'ch kai ashiq apna aap khoe ne,
Per fer vi ajj tak na oh moe ne.

Ishq hai oh awalla dariya,
Aukha jinu hai thallh pauna ho jaanda,
Je niseeban naal eh paar ho vi jaave,
Hasti eh taan vi mita jaanda.
-------
-niki Grewal(17th sept,2005)​

 

[J@tti]

You write really good

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

good one niki
tusi vee kafi creative ho

 

[MeHRaM]

IshQ​

Ishq di kimant barri hai uchhii,
Eh Pak mohabbat taan,
Rabb de naa wang hai suchhiiii.​

es ishq 'ch kai ashiq apna aap khoe ne,
Per fer vi ajj tak na oh moe ne.​

Ishq hai oh awalla dariya,
Aukha jinu hai thallh pauna ho jaanda,
Je niseeban naal eh paar ho vi jaave,
Hasti eh taan vi mita jaanda.
-------

-niki Grewal(17th sept,2005)​

good work....mainu poetry padan da bahut shauk aa.....te baddi khushi di gall aa v UNP te bade great poet ne.....and ur one of them......jatti_s te mittar sandhu v badda kaim likhde aa...ikk vaar joj 22 ne v chaar ku laina likhia si ..some thing abt yaari...main save keetian hoya ne.....keep it up guys...

 

[Guest33]

IshQ​

Ishq di kimant barri hai uchhii,
Eh Pak mohabbat taan,
Rabb de naa wang hai suchhiiii.​

es ishq 'ch kai ashiq apna aap khoe ne,
Per fer vi ajj tak na oh moe ne.​

Ishq hai oh awalla dariya,
Aukha jinu hai thallh pauna ho jaanda,
Je niseeban naal eh paar ho vi jaave,
Hasti eh taan vi mita jaanda.
-------

-niki Grewal(17th sept,2005)​

bade time baad darshan ditte ne maharaj.....sukh taan hai...... bahut vadhia likhia nikko tikkho.... keep it up...hor aun deo....

 

[Niki_Grewal]

annw feeling so gud tht atleast someone reads my poems and likes them too thanx to all of you for all tht appriciation

 

[Niki_Grewal]

bade time baad darshan ditte ne maharaj.....sukh taan hai...... bahut vadhia likhia nikko tikkho.... keep it up...hor aun deo....

Sukh taan hai ,,,yaar tusi barra sidha jeha bol dinde ho ,,,waise almost sukh hi hai ,,,,,,baaki hun tusi thorra dara jeha dita mainu ....lols j/k....was hving sum prob,,,,got it solved,,,,baaki probs chaldiyan hi rehndiyan ne .....oh yep busy in job n study,,,,so not posting much,,,,thanx for those words n concernh

 

[Niki_Grewal]

good work....mainu poetry padan da bahut shauk aa.....te baddi khushi di gall aa v UNP te bade great poet ne.....and ur one of them......jatti_s te mittar sandhu v badda kaim likhde aa...ikk vaar joj 22 ne v chaar ku laina likhia si ..some thing abt yaari...main save keetian hoya ne.....keep it up guys...

gr8 taan kithon aan ji,,,,bass budding poets jarur aan jo mada mota likh lainde aan,,,,lols,,,tusi hi gr8 banai jaande ho...thanx for appriciation

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

annw feeling so gud tht atleast someone reads my poems and likes them too thanx to all of you for all tht appriciation

comment bhave na likha
pardi hamesha haan

 

[Niki_Grewal]

Love n' Tears​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to cry whole night these endless tears.​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to hide my soul from all love's fears.​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to run away from memories of last two years.​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to question the way I gave my heart.​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to know why am I falling apart????​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to find the reason people fall in love.​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to know why does it has just a handful of cheers
And an ocean of tears, an ocean of tears, an ocean of tears…..​

Niki Grewal(March 10, 2006)​

 

[StReeT_FiGhTeR]

nikki bahut nice poems a ..keep it up..main vi bahut kuch sikhan nu milda a tuhade toon....

 

[MeHRaM]

gr8 taan kithon aan ji,,,,bass budding poets jarur aan jo mada mota likh lainde aan,,,,lols,,,tusi hi gr8 banai jaande ho...thanx for appriciation

nahi ...likhna bahut aukha kammm aa...te oh v poem.......harek banda ni kar sakda..........mera dimaag bharia pia.....par samaj ni aundi ki likhan ,kiss te likha te kinve likha ?????

 

[J@tti]

Love n' Tears​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to cry whole night these endless tears.​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to hide my soul from all love's fears.​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to run away from memories of last two years.​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to question the way I gave my heart.​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to know why am I falling apart????​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to find the reason people fall in love.​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to know why does it has just a handful of cheers
And an ocean of tears, an ocean of tears, an ocean of tears…..​

Niki Grewal(March 10, 2006)​

good work

But I hope, you don't have these feelings for long. You were very optimistic about your fate & about the strength of your love, I hope you regain it soon if you 've lost it.

 

[Rolly]

Love n' Tears​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to cry whole night these endless tears.​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to hide my soul from all love's fears.​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to run away from memories of last two years.​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to question the way I gave my heart.​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to know why am I falling apart????​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to find the reason people fall in love.​

Lying down here in the midnight dark,
I want to know why does it has just a handful of cheers
And an ocean of tears, an ocean of tears, an ocean of tears…..​

Niki Grewal(March 10, 2006)​

awesome .. jus awesome
be happy .. atleast a handful of cheers lol baaki chalde raho .. life'ch tuhannu cheers hi cheers milne lol

 

[Niki_Grewal]

nahi ...likhna bahut aukha kammm aa...te oh v poem.......harek banda ni kar sakda..........mera dimaag bharia pia.....par samaj ni aundi ki likhan ,kiss te likha te kinve likha ?????

Dimag naal ni dil naal likhida yaar ...try kerna,,,,likhloge

 

[Niki_Grewal]

good work

But I hope, you don't have these feelings for long. You were very optimistic about your fate & about the strength of your love, I hope you regain it soon if you 've lost it.

aww thanx yaar h waise optimistic hi aan(chahe jabardasti hi hovan ),,,,but pata ni kyon,,,,har week ch' ikk adha din eho jeha kyon aun lag gaya hun

 

[Niki_Grewal]

awesome .. jus awesome
be happy .. atleast a handful of cheers lol baaki chalde raho .. life'ch tuhannu cheers hi cheers milne lol

Thnx for the wishes rolly,,,i wish lots of cheers for ya tooh

 

[Niki_Grewal]

Akhan

Eh Akhan ne sach dikhaundiyan,
Eh Akhan ne Jhut lakaundiyan.

Eh Akhan ne madhoshi jhalkaundiyan,
Eh Akhan ne shrarat tapkaundyan .

Eh Akhan ne pyaar chhalkaundiyan,
Eh Akhan ne khumaar chaduandiayan.

Eh akhan ne gussa jhalkaundiyan,
Eh akhan hi ne hanjhu dullaundiyan.

Eh akhan ne koi garur dikhaundiyan,
Eh akhan hi ne bebasi chhupaundiyan.

Eh akhan ne dard naal tarfdiyan,
Eh akhan ne khushi naal hassdiyan.

Eh akhan ne teri judai ch velkadiyan,
Eh akhan ne har pal tainu udeekdiyan.

Eh akhan ne bigane kade siyaandiyan,
Eh akhan ne dil da haal biyaandiyan.

Bass perhne da tainu je wall aawe,
Eh akhan taan barra kuchh boldiyan.

Niki Grewal(March12.2006)​