~*!*~My Poems~*!*~

[MaRjAnA]

omggggggggggggg....joj ki ho gaya,,,,,mainu taan siyaane lagde si tusi...kyon recod kharab keri jaane ho apna,,,,eh koi india

Mai aaj kal veese hi dukhi hunda,,,kam c te mai mall gaya te aggo eeve hi bolan lag paya,,,,te changiayn paniyan ...te fer mai bhaj aaya eve kitte pulice aa jandi fer

 

[Some1]

 

[can_jatti]

rolf rolf rolf rolf

Mai aaj kal veese hi dukhi hunda,,,kam c te mai mall gaya te aggo eeve hi bolan lag paya,,,,te changiayn paniyan ...te fer mai bhaj aaya eve kitte pulice aa jandi fer

 

[Niki_Grewal]

Mai aaj kal veese hi dukhi hunda,,,kam c te mai mall gaya te aggo eeve hi bolan lag paya,,,,te changiayn paniyan ...te fer mai bhaj aaya eve kitte pulice aa jandi fer

lolsssssssssssss u r too much sachi guri..........mere veere da vi lagda ithe aake aahi haal honarolf rolf rolf rolf rolf rolf rolf

 

[Niki_Grewal]

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ishq de painde te turna

Ishqe da painda kandyan da hona,
dekhi kite lau luhaan na ho jaein.

Lahu luhaan vi je ho gaieon,
dekhi kite ishqe nu laaj na la jaein.

lahu naal sinjya boota ishq da,
shala phull vi dau sooohe laal,
bass turdi ja ni jinde sidak de naal.

niki grewal (nov 23rd,2005)​

 

[J@tti]

Its good..

 

[Niki_Grewal]

Zindgi

Kade mainu lagge
zindgi da painda hai barra lamera.
Kade mainu lagge
Zindgi da painada hai barra hanera.

Kade mainu lagge
Zindgi hai ikk sufna haseen jeha.
Kade mainu lagge
Zindgi hai ikk raah gamgeen jeha.

Kade mainu lagge
Zindgi hai naam pyaaran da.
Kade mainu lagge
Zindgi hai naam khumaaran da.

Kade mainu lagge
Zindgi mili hai rabb nu banaun lai yaar.
Kade mainu lagge
Zindgi mili hai apa labhan lai vich pyaar.

Kade mainu lagge
Zindgi hai ban jana bheed da ikk hissa.
Kade mainu lagge
Zindgi hai gharna nava ikk kissa.

Kade mainu lagge
Zindgi hai jeena mann nu maar.
Kade mainu lagge
Zindgi hai jitna vich har haar.

-Niki Grewal(13th May,2005)

 

[Sandhu]

good work, and a nice try for understanding and expressing about life (Ek Na Samjhi Jaan Wali Paheli). well done. and wanna say:-

Kade mainu lagge
Zindagi hai ek ajjit pahad
Kade mainu lagge
Zindagi hai NIKI di kavitavan di bahar.

Sorry i am not trying to copy your poem.

 

[MeHRaM]

gud one.....life?????...main ta ihi kahoooga ..........

 

[J@tti]

Loved it.. it's so true

 

[Niki_Grewal]

good work, and a nice try for understanding and expressing about life (Ek Na Samjhi Jaan Wali Paheli). well done. and wanna say:-

Kade mainu lagge
Zindagi hai ek ajjit pahad
Kade mainu lagge
Zindagi hai NIKI di kavitavan di bahar.

Sorry i am not trying to copy your poem.

lolsssss.....thanx for the tareef tht too in sucha style ...well i agree uljhi hui paheli hai Zindgi,,,,samjhde samjhde umar mukk jaandi

 

[Niki_Grewal]

Zingdi 'ch kuchh phase aunde ne,,,,bure te change dono,,,,,ikk bure phase ch likhi hoyian kuchh lines post keran laggi aan,,,,,rabb da shukar hai,,,,bure din vi change dina di tarah nikle hi jaande ne.

Rabb nu mehne

Jis rabb ne ishq banaya,​

Mehne ajj ohnu den nu jee kerda.

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mera apne hi naina de pani ch,

Haye ve rabba dub maran nu jee kerda.
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Daatan dena taan teri rehmat hai,
Daatan de ke khon nu main ki akhan?

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Sach dassan ajj taan Taitho,
daatan den da hakk vi khohan nu jee kerda.


Lakha de tu yaar khoe,
Mera khohan laggaya taan
tainu bad dua jehi den nu jee kerda.
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Jinna hadda ch ishq tu rachaya ve,
Aina hadda nu agg lake sawah banaun nu jee kerda.​

Majboori vi koi shae je banuni si tu,
Taan dil na di shae banun di galti kyon kiti?​

Mera ajj Teri banai har shae da,
namo nishan vi mataun nu jee kerda.
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Tu hi oh rabb hain na jisne ishq banaya,​

Tanhi Ajj tainu mehne den nu jee kerda.

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-Niki Grewal (nov 6th,2005)​

 

[J@tti]

It's so touching.. you write really really good

 

[Niki_Grewal]

It's so touching.. you write really really good

thanx yaar,,,,,even i like it,,,,mera har gall ch' +ve cheej labhan di adat kerke mainu bass aahi ikko cheej labhdi aa uss bure waqat chon +ve,,,,ke kuchhh lines main dilon likh saki (thank God I have regained my +ve thinking).

 

[J@tti]

thanx yaar,,,,,even i like it,,,,mera har gall ch' +ve cheej labhan di adat kerke mainu bass aahi ikko cheej labhdi aa uss bure waqat chon +ve,,,,ke kuchhh lines main dilon likh saki (thank God I have regained my +ve thinking).

I 'm glad you did.. may all happiness be yours forever

 

[Niki_Grewal]

I 'm glad you did.. may all happiness be yours forever [/quote

annww,,,thanx a tonnnnnn, ,,,,,,happiness will certainly come some day ....just waitin n hoping for it

 

[J@tti]

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[Niki_Grewal]

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[Niki_Grewal]

Meri Ankhein aur Main​

Ek raat ko sehmii si koi chup meri aankhon ke,
Samne kuch beete hue lemhe le aayiii.​

Kaise fir bhuji bhuji si Aankhon mein,
kuchh ashqon ne apni mazudaki batlaiii.​

Jagte hue neend mein dubna chahein aankhein,
Jab jab woh dilkhashh si muskrahat yaad aaaiii.​

Seene mein ek khamosh tammna uthi,
Aur meri masoom si aankhon ko behlaa gaiii.​

Ye kaisi majboori hai aankhon ne jiski hasrat ki,
Paas aate aate woh azeem shae kho si gaiiii.​

Niki Grewal(March5th,2006)​

 

[StReeT_FiGhTeR]

its awesome nikki...sachi really nice a ...i am luck that i read it first ..hehehhehe

Meri Ankhein aur Main​

Ek raat ko sehmii si koi chup meri aankhon ke,
Samne kuch beete hue lemhe le aayiii.​

Kaise fir bhuji bhuji si Aankhon mein,
kuchh ashqon ne apni mazudaki batlaiii.​

Jagte hue neend mein dubna chahein aankhein,
Jab jab woh dilkhashh si muskrahat yaad aaaiii.​

Seene mein ek khamosh tammna uthi,
Aur meri masoom si aankhon ko behlaa gaiii.​

Ye kaisi majboori hai aankhon ne jiski hasrat ki,
Paas aate aate woh azeem shae kho si gaiiii.​

Niki Grewal(March4th,2006)​