UNP-UNPAINS(LIKHDE HO JADON)

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Jass G

Bass tusi taan sire hi gall laa diti

Bahut Wadhia

bahut achhe.

Mainu tuhadi eh rachna bahut hi jiada pasand aai.

Isey tarah ikhde raho.

Jagpal

thanx jagpal veer ...

 

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boht wadiya likhya veere

thanx dear....

 

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Thanks 22 ji

thanx veer

 

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nai smily g main serious nai hoi. chalo khair chado ehnu. waise mainu tuhadi suggestion boht kam aai. hun poem parn to pehla poet da naam zarur prdi ha. thnx g.

thanx dear..... Eh bani na gal ......

 

[sunny240]

thanx dear...
ki hal ne sunny dear, howz ur job going on...

hall wadyiea ne jass veer,,,,bus time katt rahe haa..........
hor tuhade ki hall ne.....

 

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hall wadyiea ne jass veer,,,,bus time katt rahe haa..........
hor tuhade ki hall ne.....

Main vi teek haan mehar hai waheguru ji di.....

 

[Ravivir]

kise de likhe dard te apni mohar lana sokha hai
par usda dard hadauna bada okha bhaji

 

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kise de likhe dard te apni mohar lana sokha hai
par usda dard hadauna bada okha bhaji

sahi keha ravi dear, Is layi hi keha ki us ton pucho jis ne oh likhi hove us da dard ya us vele us di bhavna oh hi samjh sakda hai...... duje di likhe te naa apna likhna chaga ni honda......

 

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

paaji...bahot hi vadiya likheya

 

[sandeep_sharma]

gajab yaar

 

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paaji...bahot hi vadiya likheya

thanx sp veer

 

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thanx gagan veer...

 

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gajab yaar

thanx dear.....

 

[amanNBN]

nice.....tfs...

 

[Rajat]

nice...

tfs...

 

[jaggi633725]

nice.

 

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nice.....tfs...

thanx dear.....

 

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nice.

thanx dear......

 

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nice.

thanx....