UNP-UNPAINS(LIKHDE HO JADON)

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UNP FRIEND MERE DIL VICH AAJ EH KHIYAA AYA TE MAIN SOCH ES NU SUB NAAL SHARE KARAAN .TE DOSTO EK REQUEST VI KARANGA KI JADON VI TUSI KISE DA LIKHAYA POST KARDE HO TE US DA NAAM JAROR LIKH DAYA KARO,JO US MAAN DA ASLI HAQDAAR HOVE .....
EH KISE NU HURT KARAN LAYI NAHI LIKHAYA, BAS EH SOCHAYA KE LIKHYA KE KISE DI KALPNA TE DARD TE APNAA NAA LIKHANA CHANGA NAHI .......

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LIKHDA AE JADO , TAAN DIL DE NAAL LIKH
KALAM DE NAAL , APNE DIL DA HAAL LIKH,
KUCH LIKH ADHURE SUPNE APNE,
TE KUJ ES DUNIYAA DA HAAL LIKH, ​

JADON VI LIKHEIN DOSTA,
APNE UNSULJHE JE SAWAL LIKH,
LIKH RABB DIYAA REHMTAAN,
TE KUJ KUDRAT TE KAMAL LIKH, ​

KUJ ADHURE SUPNE MOHHBAT VALE,
TE KUJ SOKH ADAVAAN SAJANA DIYAN,APNI KALAM DE NAAL LIKH
KUJ GALAN CHARCHA(DISCUSSION) VALIYAA,
TE KUJ AMBRAAN VICH UDAARIYAAN MAARN VALE KHIYAAL LIKH,​

KI LIKHI JANDAAN AE 'JAS' TUN,
LIKHANA HAI TE APNE PUNJAB DA HAAL LIKH,
SARKAARAN DE JHOTHE VAADEYAAN DI BALI CHADHE LOKI,
TE BIJALI-PANI LAYI TARSDE, KISAAN KINE HAIN BEHAAL LIKH,​

BHULI BAITHE JO SHAHIDAAN TE SHURVEERAN DIYAAN SHAHADATAAN ,
DESH TE KAUM NU JAGAUN VALE, KUL BHULE SAWAL DA JAWAB LIKH,
ROOL DITA SABEYAACHAR NAUJAWAN NE ETHE,
SIRAAN TE NA RAHIYAA CHUNIYAA MUTIYAARAN DE,TE GABRUAAN DI KITHE GAYI SOHNI DASTAAR LIKH, ​

NA LIKH DUJEYAA DIYAA NAZMAA,SHAYRIYAAN TE NAAM APNA,
LIKHNA HAI TAAN APNE DIL DE ULJE HOYE SWAAL LIKH,
KI KAREINGA JHOTHIYAAN SOHRATAAN MITRA,
NAA LIKH KE SACHE SHAYAR DA, TE US DI LEKHNI NU BEMISAAL LIKH,​

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[Konvicted_Jatt]

wow!!!!! 22g bahut vadiya,,,, tfs

 

[Johal]

bhaut sohna likha 22 gg

i agree with ur thoughts

 

[Lily]

bohut bohut bohut vadiiiya...

tfs^^

 

[Loveye]

.................

 

[close ur eyes and make a wish]

bhut vadiya smily ji

 

[smilly]

bhaut sohna likha 22 gg

i agree with ur thoughts

thanx johal 22 ji , Enha vich kuj thoughts taan shayri vichon lupat hi honde ja rahe ne , jayada tar sub isq vaare hi likhde rehnde ne ,

Aur bhi dard hain zamane mein isq ke siva......

22 ji ek writer nu bada dukh honda hai jadon oh apna likhe te duje da naa vekhda hai.

 

[smilly]

wow!!!!! 22g bahut vadiya,,,, tfs

thanx ronny veer....

 

[smilly]

bohut bohut bohut vadiiiya...

tfs^^

thanx dear.....

 

[smilly]

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thanx dear........

 

[smilly]

bhut vadiya smily ji

thanks dear........................

 

[smilly]

thanx joban 22 ji.......

 

[V € € R]

bahot sohna likheya jass 22 ji...........

 

[dhana_jatt]

kaim aa bai ji

 

[smilly]

bahot sohna likheya jass 22 ji...........

thanx dear....
.

 

[smilly]

kaim aa bai ji

thanx dhane veer

 

[sunny240]

bahut wadyiea jass veer hamesha wang.............
ewe he likhde raho...........

 

[saini2004]

tareef lyi lafaj nyi hun mere kol.........

 

[nanny@]

you hav wriiten very thoughtfully nd really its very nice g.
but main tuhanu kuj puchna chahndi ha. plz dont mind it. tusi kiha KI JADON VI TUSI KISE DA LIKHAYA POST KARDE HO TE US DA NAAM JAROR LIKH DAYA KARO,JO US MAAN DA ASLI HAQDAAR HOVE .....
EH KISE NU HURT KARAN LAYI NAHI LIKHAYA, BAS EH SOCHAYA KE LIKHYA KE KISE DI KALPNA TE DARD TE APNAA NAA LIKHANA CHANGA NAHI ....... i m totally agreed with u. but je ohna da naam hi na pata hovey jinna ne sheyar likhya hove. then wht will we do? plz answer me 2 this question. i hope tusi zaroor meri is gal da jawab deyonge. i will wait 4 ur reply.

 

[Royal_Punjaban]

bhout hi vadiya ji...........