Meri Teesri Poem lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

[Pardesan Punjaban]

hahahahahahaha gud one

bhene aaj hee aye aounde hee jas da saath

 

[SherDil™]

bhene aaj hee aye aounde hee jas da saath

Koi na Sando tera Bhaee Hai NA HAle

 

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

Koi na Sando tera Bhaee Hai NA HAle

tu ki kar lena

 

[Gabru_Gulab_Varga]

Chal gal shado, Sando di viah shaadi tan hoju gi. Aakhir inhe bhraa jo niklae.

PP this one's for you, (yeah...and don't worry I know your alone and happy):

Tere haaseyan ton jind vaar deiye,
Par dukh tere nahi seh sakde.
duniya chahe sanu lakh chad de,
par asin tere baajo nahi reh sakde.
sadi khamoshi samjh sake ta samjh lavi,
har ik gal asin apni zubano nahi keh sakde.

:star

 

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

djatt
par tussi kaun

 

[Gabru_Gulab_Varga]

djatt, janke dangerouslyjatt. Do char guppa shuppa mare ke tan vekh, apphi jaan kari hoju.

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

Koi na Sando tera Bhaee Hai NA HAle

tu ki kar lena

....

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

Chal gal shado, Sando di viah shaadi tan hoju gi. Aakhir inhe bhraa jo niklae.

PP this one's for you, (yeah...and don't worry I know your alone and happy):

Tere haaseyan ton jind vaar deiye,
Par dukh tere nahi seh sakde.
duniya chahe sanu lakh chad de,
par asin tere baajo nahi reh sakde.
sadi khamoshi samjh sake ta samjh lavi,
har ik gal asin apni zubano nahi keh sakde.

:star

ji for da peom
sohni aa

per seems like u know me really wellsmirk
tusi kaun ho
plz das dioo

 

[Nittu_pathania]

Bahut hi sohni hai ji.

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

thanks aa ji

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

djatt, janke dangerouslyjatt. Do char guppa shuppa mare ke tan vekh, apphi jaan kari hoju.

veer g kithe ho tusi

 

[Ravivir]

TUHANU KIHRE DUKH LAG GAYE
TUHANU BOTTLE VICH DOST LABHE NA LABHE
HAAN UNP TE SADE JIHE DOST JARUR LABH JANGE
JINIA SHARTA TUDI RAKHIA SAB PURI KARAN WALE


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[smilly]

bhut hi vadiyaa likhaya dear.........

 

[Johal]

wowwwwww

wakaiii tussii sohnaaa likhdee hooo.

PP ggg bhut sohniii likhiiii poemmmm tusiii,
wakaiii tussii sohnaaa likhdee hooo.
watt kaddd diteeee ajj teee tusi.

baki mein tuadii ik help kar sakda han
bottal da orderrr den di
jis wich tusi te tuhada pyara jeha dostt aa jawee.
te baad wichh upperooo dhakkannn laun diii

 

[simar]

nice poem...u can call it a khulli kavita.....

 

[Konvicted_Jatt]

kaim hai........

 

[jaggi633725]

Re: Meri Teesri Poem lolzzzzzz

very nice