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[Pardesan Punjaban]

any time kp

 

[dhana_jatt]

:O:O:O:O



bohat sohni likhi ji

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[Maxsteel]

good work !!!keep it up.

 

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

mannu haje tak ik gal samajh nahi aayi...

duniya vich aenni vaddi botal hegi jidhe vich tuhada freind aaje??

 

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

thanks aa bhaji
yeh likhagi

main tuhanu kehn lagga c, bhraavan utte vi kuchh likho, ovi likhta tusi... GOOD

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

:O:O:O



bohat sohni likhi ji

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thanks aa ji
dhana needs doctorana
lagda aaj kal main kaafi shock de rahi

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

good work !!!keep it up.

something wrong wid u maxi
jihri meri sifat kiti

thanks aa ji

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

mannu haje tak ik gal samajh nahi aayi...

duniya vich aenni vaddi botal hegi jidhe vich tuhada freind aaje??

21st sadi aa
je nah vi hoyie bana lavage

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

main tuhanu kehn lagga c, bhraavan utte vi kuchh likho, ovi likhta tusi... GOOD

u see am mind reader
can read ur mind

 

[Some1]

thanks aa ji
jadon tahude naal gal karni hundi tusi labhde nahi
is laie bottle ch paa dena kee mere naal hovo hamesha jadon lod payie kad lia karna and fer vaapse

yeh assi interesting bande te poem ci interesting likhani
aaj tak kise vi poet ne ih subject nahi lia hona

aaho genie in the bottle te kehra poem likhu

te bottle'ch rakhonge ikalle mainu ?
ik adha hot jiha ___ wi paa deyo te thorra jiha kuch khaan peen nu wi de deyo te thorre je sahele saheliyaan bas

baaki list oddon daoon jadon bottle'ch paaonge

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

aaho genie in the bottle te kehra poem likhu

te bottle'ch rakhonge ikalle mainu ?
ik adha hot jiha ___ wi paa deyo te thorra jiha kuch khaan peen nu wi de deyo te thorre je sahele saheliyaan bas

baaki list oddon daoon jadon bottle'ch paaonge

bottle verga ghar theek aa
vich pc
unlimited internet
star coffee
fav testurent

 

[mast malang]

wah ji wah......eani vadiya poem likhi aa....
fer hashan wali ki gall aa....
yaar sachi bahot vadiya likhde ho....
mainu te ptaa hi nai c k tuhade andhar v kise poet ne janam lai liya..
ok ji keep up ur gud work....j kde ink khatam ho gayi tan dass diyo...

 

[Some1]

bottle verga ghar theek aa
vich pc
unlimited internet
star coffee
fav testurent

PerFecT

kadde kadde vacation layi wi kadd deyo

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

PerFecT

kadde kadde vacation layi wi kadd deyo

now u r asking for too much
hmmmmmmmm
je tusi behave kita then theek

 

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

PerFecT

kadde kadde vacation layi wi kadd deyo

kaddan di ki lorh?

shopping center, resort, etc vi available hoyega....

 

[guywidattitude]

hye rabba dost mangia
ithe wiah dee gal kithon aa gayie

ajje te os vaare likhi vi nahi


os laie bas innia hee expections nahi honia
hor vi bahut honia

fer ni hunda tera viah kudiye, laleeeen jor

 

[Guest33]

iniyan expectations
rab naal hi viah kara lai
:D

hahahahahahaha gud one

 

[Guest33]

o balle PP fatte chakk ditte, its very interesting

par mainu pata ki tusi aah poem kyon likhi aa, tuhadi bottle vaali friend ajjkal jaada busy ho gayi kamm kaar ch, haina?
i miss booble too, sachi dher saara, 2 vaar call keeti, message chadya, hun lagda sydney aake milna paina. je gall hove ta dassna ki i miss her a lot.

te tuhadi poem de vaare vaare jayiye, sachi bottle vaala labhiye hun

bheno pyario...msg mil gaye si jot , angle te sando de tinna da....i'm free on tuesday te sab naal gallan kardi haan...hun sab chuttian gayian this week is last one and for me......so catch u guys..


sando gud poem.........

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

wah ji wah......eani vadiya poem likhi aa....
fer hashan wali ki gall aa....
yaar sachi bahot vadiya likhde ho....
mainu te ptaa hi nai c k tuhade andhar v kise poet ne janam lai liya..
ok ji keep up ur gud work....j kde ink khatam ho gayi tan dass diyo...

thanks aa ji
haan ji je ink khtam ho gaie fer thude kol hee laini

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

fer ni hunda tera viah kudiye, laleeeen jor