** Meri First Poem**

[Pardesan Punjaban]

am jst kiddiinngg yaarr....


hahahhaaha

ohh................

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

wese yaar tusi aapni intro deo plz............

myselff.......

MIRZA

frm PUNJAB,,...... hoshiarpur/.

pp
from unp

 

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

pp
from unp

sando dee, hor kuchh nahi bolna???

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

sando dee, hor kuchh nahi bolna???

inna bahut hai is thread ch
baaki 9000 ton jiada post ch mere vaaree hee main likhia
pata lag jaana

 

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

aho ji aevi gal think hai.........

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
am pp here

 

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

u r ppiye, peepni, sando, sandy, sand-e, etc

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

ajje hor vi name aa

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

main ida kis tara likhia........

 

[reshmi_mutiyar]

Dil Kare Saari Umer Ajaad Panshi Vaang Udda
Per Kade Is Ajaad Jindgi Noo
Lagam Te Beria Paoun Noo Dil Karda


this line is grrr8 dear,, bohut sohni nazam likhi aa ​

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

thanks aa sis g
pata nahi os month kise poet dee atama si 4 likh ditian si

 

[reshmi_mutiyar]

pata nahi os month kise poet dee atama si 4 likh ditian si



hahahhahahahahahhahaha

 

[smilly]

bhut vadiyaa ..... ji ...

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

thanks aa ji...............

 

[❤ ❤ ❤Jalebi❤ ❤ ❤]

GREATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT.........

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

pata nahi kion aaj vi poem likhan noo dil karda...................

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

GREATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT.........

thanks aa sis g

 

[Kav]

Dil Kare Saari Umer Maa Dee God Ch Sir Rakh Ke Saun Java
Par Kade Kise Anjaan Dia
Baanha Ch Jaan Noo Dil Karda​

Dil Kare Saari Umer Ajaad Panshi Vaang Udda
Per Kade Is Ajaad Jindgi Noo
Lagam Te Beria Paoun Noo Dil Karda​

bai kudi noo viyaah do chhetti chhetti................ jiddan marji da munda mile................. aah taan kudi samjho bas gayee hathon................

 

[Ravivir]

COULD U TELL ME. WHO IS THIS ANJAN
PRDESAN PUNJABAN JI

 

[dhana_jatt]

je das hi dita fer anjan kahda rehna oh