Meri First Poem

Konvicted_Jatt · Jan 30, 2007

Pardesan Punjaban said:
Thanks aa ji

u r well wala come ji,,,,

Pardesan Punjaban · Feb 2, 2007

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aMiToJ · Feb 2, 2007

wow

gr8

Konvicted_Jatt · Feb 3, 2007

PP,,,,

Pardesan Punjaban · Feb 3, 2007

thanks aa ji :gig

Pardesan Punjaban · Feb 3, 2007

pps309 said:
Nice poem......bohat sahi likhi aa....

thanks aa ji

guywidattitude · Feb 3, 2007

vishwas nahin hota kya ye wohi seendal hai
u r great....................

jonty509 · Feb 5, 2007

Wowowoowwww.............zabardast.......

i cant believe its sandeep's first poem.....marvellous...words nahi haige mere kol tarif karan nu....eni sohni poem kive likhi ....i donoo.....

but sachi maza aa gaya pad kee.......

I can say this is one of the best poem i have ever heard in my life...

Well done sandeep jee...and keep it up...

hope ki tusin edan diyan pyarian pyarian poems likhde rahoge...

all d best.....

Pardesan Punjaban said:
Main saaria dia kaafi poem paria>np
te mera dil kita kee main vi poem likh ke dekha
ih meri first poem aa:
soach ke te poem likhi par pata nahi kee bania hona
plz mainu inna likhana nahi aounda par ke ih nah sochioo kudi kamli aa
hasioo nah
chalo je has vi lavoge te kee farak paina

ih lavo ji meri first ever poem

ULJHAN

Iss Uljhi Hoyie Meri Jindgi Noo
Kade Hor Uljhoun Noo Dil Karda

Dil Kare Saari Umer Maa Dee God Ch Sir Rakh Ke Saun Java
Par Kade Kise Anjaan Dia
Baanha Ch Jaan Noo Dil Karda

Dil Kare Saari Umer Ajaad Panshi Vaang Udda
Per Kade Is Ajaad Jindgi Noo
Lagam Te Beria Paoun Noo Dil Karda

Dil Kare Saaari Umer Maa Dia Pakia Khava
Per Kade Kise Anjaan Dia
Pakoun Noo Dil Karda

Dil Kare Saari Umer Sahelia Naal Hasadi Dee Lang Jaave
Per Kade Kise Anjaan De Modhe Te Sir Rakh Ke
Dil Dia Das Ke Ron Noo Dil Karda

Dil Kahe Main Apne App Noo Kade Nah Badala
Per Kade Kise Anjaan Dee Khushi Laie
Apna Saara Kujh Latoun Noo Dil Karda

Dil Kare Main Apni Vi Koie Hond Banava
Per Kade Kise Anjaan Dee Hond Vich
Apne App Dee Hond Gavoun Noo Dil Karda

Dil Kare Iss Badhana Bhare Samaj Ton Door Kite Bhaj Java
Per Kade Dite Hoye Sanskaara Val Dekh Ke
Maa Baap Dia Sadhara Pooria Karan Noo Dil Karda

Dil Kahe Main Iss Tara Kida Soch Sakdi
Per Kade Mere Vergi Changi Bhali Kudi Noo Vi
Kise Anjaan Laie Sudain Banan Noo Dil Karda

Iss Uljhi Hoyie Meri Jindgi Vich
Kade Kise Anjaan Noo Vi Uljhoun Noo Dil Karda

Pardesan

24.01.2007

Pardesan Punjaban · Feb 6, 2007

guywidattitude said:
vishwas nahin hota kya ye wohi seendal hai
u r great....................

thanks aa ji jas
baley tere :gig

paran da time lag hee gia :gig

heheheh

Pardesan Punjaban · Feb 6, 2007

jonty said:
Wowowoowwww.............zabardast.......

i cant believe its sandeep's first poem.....marvellous...words nahi haige mere kol tarif karan nu....eni sohni poem kive likhi ....i donoo.....

but sachi maza aa gaya pad kee.......

I can say this is one of the best poem i have ever heard in my life...

Well done sandeep jee...and keep it up...

hope ki tusin edan diyan pyarian pyarian poems likhde rahoge...

all d best.....

thanks aa ji je tahnoo pasand ayie :yes

Pardesan Punjaban · Mar 8, 2007

aaj lahenge dekh ke
hor uljhan noo dil karda rofl

aajojineaaounasahmne_mirzahere · Mar 14, 2007

........................................................ tera koi kasoor na naaarreeee....

nakhraa chadi jawaani da.......................!

hahahahahhahahahahaa.........

khoooooooolll...!

aajojineaaounasahmne_mirzahere · Mar 14, 2007

galll baat a guddi d .....

hahahahahahhahaahhahaa

Pardesan Punjaban · Mar 15, 2007

kudi_patole_wargi · Mar 15, 2007

gulabo...cant beleive tusi v aina wadiya likhan lag gaye...realli bahut sohna likheya :hug

..main chori kar sakdi aa? :an

...lol
4 gulabo :fu

Pardesan Punjaban · Mar 15, 2007

kudi_patole_wargi said:
gulabo...cant beleive tusi v aina wadiya likhan lag gaye...realli bahut sohna likheya..main chori kar sakdi aa?...lol
4 gulabo

thanks aa ji :hug