Kise de akhran wich naa kde apna paaiye na

[miss navi]

g bilkul sahi aa......

 

[guppikainth]

Nai ji idda bilkul ni karna chahida......eh kise vi trah thik nahi hai kyuki kise di mehnat te assi apna naam nahi kar sakde aur akhran nu jodan layi ohna nu ik geet ya kavita banaan layi bout mehnat di lod hai islayi kise de akhran che apna naam paake os likhari naal thakka ni karna chahida....

 

[Naughty_always]

bilkul theek jaswinder bro....eh krna glt aa.....

nd ik sach main v bol reha....main koi poetry ni likhda.....haan ik ja do jina ch mera name aa oh main jaroor rabb di kirpa naal likhe ............baki sarri jeri v poetry main unp te pauna oh main sarri copy paste kiti hundi aa............bt main ode ch kde aapna name ni paya

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

bilkul theek jaswinder bro....eh krna glt aa.....

nd ik sach main v bol reha....main koi poetry ni likhda.....haan ik ja do jina ch mera name aa oh main jaroor rabb di kirpa naal likhe ............baki sarri jeri v poetry main unp te pauna oh main sarri copy paste kiti hundi aa............bt main ode ch kde aapna name ni paya

sach bollan lyi hounslaa chahida yaara,, thanks veer, hats off to you

 

[Naughty_always]

sach bollan lyi hounslaa chahida yaara,, thanks veer, hats off to you

to u bro...jo eh thread banaya..

 

[randeep_gill]

I dont think eh theek e.. je naa pauna hai taan us da credit banda hai

 

[loardgharia sidhu]

sir no dout tuhadi post sahi a .......par jo baadnam karde n ohna nu rokna v sada farz a m sirf ena kiha si & tuhade to ohi umeed kiti si jo m karki ethe register kita si & khushi hoe ki tusi kafi haad tak sade nal o ...........thnku so much sir