bahut acha likha hai aapne likhi ja bas teri kalam na thake veer
P-a-r-d-e-s-i Ranja Apr 24, 2008 #22 smilly said: Veer bahot vadiyaa ..... Main vi likhda haan apna dard ghataon nu, Click to expand... thanks veer ji.. tuhanu bhi koi dard hai.. shayari karde hi ohi ne...
smilly said: Veer bahot vadiyaa ..... Main vi likhda haan apna dard ghataon nu, Click to expand... thanks veer ji.. tuhanu bhi koi dard hai.. shayari karde hi ohi ne...
P-a-r-d-e-s-i Ranja Apr 24, 2008 #23 veer said: tuhadda bhi jawab nai pardesi 22 ji........ Click to expand... thanks veer ji
smilly VIP Apr 25, 2008 #24 P-a-r-d-e-s-i said: thanks veer ji.. tuhanu bhi koi dard hai.. shayari karde hi ohi ne... Click to expand... Haan ji veer par ek hove taan dasan hun taan dardan naal gudha rista ho gaya ... meri har purani te navi poetry vich oh jalak hi janda hai. Es layi taan zindagi nu ek an-suljha sawal hai..
P-a-r-d-e-s-i said: thanks veer ji.. tuhanu bhi koi dard hai.. shayari karde hi ohi ne... Click to expand... Haan ji veer par ek hove taan dasan hun taan dardan naal gudha rista ho gaya ... meri har purani te navi poetry vich oh jalak hi janda hai. Es layi taan zindagi nu ek an-suljha sawal hai..
smilly VIP Apr 26, 2008 #26 SinghinEU said: very nice... tfs. Click to expand... thanx dear..........