Why Stars r So Far??

[Maxsteel]

Last nite i was sitting under blue sky
counting da stars in moon lite:star

One star was standing alone
mesmerized me by her beauty hold spellbound0t


a breeze came n took me to a height
after tht it said i cant fly


knowing dat without oxygen i cant glide
still i want to reach ther with a slide

i struggled again ,my breath went down
it was da time when i lie down

lucking at her,she was smiling
giving a hint,dnt do crawl-ing


dis distance can never b completed
datz da life,god has created.




SUDDENLY A VOICE CAME
seems to b known,bt wid NO NAME
"Uthh jao maharaj nahi,, tah honi thuhadi pitai
thale sutt ke gandi kitti hoyi hai tussi rajaii"


Mom m UP m Up g!!!!





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[pink puma]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww how sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet nitin ji wah wah kamaal kar diti :D your an amazing writer ji :D

 

[pink puma]

arre uth jao maharajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj >haha >haha hun taan uth jaaaoooo >haha >haha

 

[pink puma]

haaye haayeeeeeeee kinni kismat waali pushpinder kaur >haha >haha >haha

 

[Maxsteel]

haaye haayeeeeeeee kinni kismat waali pushpinder kaur >haha >haha >haha

oye mein serious poem pehli vaar likhi apni puspinder kaur vaste.makhaul na karo

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
veer ji amazing wording
love it

 

[Maxsteel]

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
veer ji amazing wording
love it

Ji wording change karni peni lagda

Last nite i was sitting under blue sky
counting da stars in moon lite

ene ch teri bhabi chilaai
Ji dudh pe lao te ajo sauiye
kuo ji meinu ajj neend badi cheeti ayii
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[kudi_patole_wargi]

oye ah pushpinder kaur kaun aa

 

[Maxsteel]

oye ah pushpinder kaur kaun aa

ji push+pin+der kaur is a 48 yr old lady....whom i love more than myself becoz uss kol passa bahut hai.

 

[.::singh chani::.]

nice tfs......