.: pardesiya lai kuj likhiya :.

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main aiya c ethe laike wadde khwaab
pata ni ki soch k chadiya c main apna punjaab
hun main ronda firda galian vich
sara din te sari raat peenda main shraab
meri akhan vich hun hanju
karda gulami ethe,kahawan main gulaam
mere mulk vich c tohr
karde c aish ki sawer ki shaam
oh v hunde c din kade
karde c badmaashi shareaam
hun tan bas dukh li palle reh gaye
kade hundi c yaaran di shaan
pardes vich wasde mere veero
ikko gall akhan tuhanu
chota veer samajh k mann liyo
kite gorey na ban jaiyo
tusi rahoge desi eh jaan liyo
karo na kise di nakal ,banao apni pachaan
sab nu dikhao,kon hunde punjabi te ki hai ohna di shaan

1st time kuj ajeha try kita
je koi galti hogi howe
tan maafi mangda

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[beautiful]

it is nice poem. to be honest i never had this kind of feelings. so i m not gonna say i understand ur feelings bcuz this kind of feelings u feel only if u experiment these things and i never did that.
anyway i respect ur feelings.

 

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it is nice poem. to be honest i never had this kind of feelings. so i m not gonna say i understand ur feelings bcuz this kind of feelings u feel only if u experiment these things and i never did that.
anyway i respect ur feelings.

thanks ji

 

[MAVERICK]

hai te vadhiya
par aa dukh takleefan dhakke
eh te bahar le hi dass sakde

 

[jattpunjabi]

sorry veere main teri is poem naal sehmat nai

 

[Konvicted_Jatt]

gud a veere bahut vadia hai,,,,

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

bahut nice likhia aa nav ji
is tara dee feeling bahut saare youngster dee hundia jadon oh ounjab chad ke aounde
specially ppl on student visa and belong to well settle families
jadon ohna ne india ch gud life dekhi hundii and ithe aa ke jadon hard kam karna painda
study+job oh vi cash lain laie job jihria ohna ne kade karn vaare sochia vi nahi hona
and oh alone hunde on da top

tusi ohna dia feelings noo bahut waddiya thang naal likhia
gud on ya

 

[nav-3]

sorry veere main teri is poem naal sehmat nai

koi ni 22ji jehde nahi sehmat jaroor dasso ,nale apne views v dasso

 

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bahut nice likhia aa nav ji
is tara dee feeling bahut saare youngster dee hundia jadon oh ounjab chad ke aounde
specially ppl on student visa and belong to well settle families
jadon ohna ne india ch gud life dekhi hundii and ithe aa ke jadon hard kam karna painda
study+job oh vi cash lain laie job jihria ohna ne kade karn vaare sochia vi nahi hona
and oh alone hunde on da top

tusi ohna dia feelings noo bahut waddiya thang naal likhia
gud on ya

sachi dassa tan ji ,mian apne future baare likhiya ,menu ni pata kidda likhia but tried my best

 

[jattpunjabi]

koi ni 22ji jehde nahi sehmat jaroor dasso ,nale apne views v dasso

veer je taan teri personal life naal aa kush related pher taan main kush nai kenda..........ho sakda tu punjab shad ke kise desh ch aya hove veer ate tainu oh kush na miliya hove jo tu kush soch ke aya.......zindgi ch ki pata kis vele kis utte musibat aa jave........main yaar kush hor gallan karke akea c.......khair shad yaar.

 

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veer je taan teri personal life naal aa kush related pher taan main kush nai kenda..........ho sakda tu punjab shad ke kise desh ch aya hove veer ate tainu oh kush na miliya hove jo tu kush soch ke aya.......zindgi ch ki pata kis vele kis utte musibat aa jave........main yaar kush hor gallan karke akea c.......khair shad yaar.

chalo koi ni ,ghatto gahtt tusi reply tan kita mere thread te ,thnx for dat

 

[SherDil™]

Good work ji.vaise ta main aaha jihe poema shayri wale kamm pasand ni karda te na hi reply karda .bas ke tu aapne Tiger club da member aa te aapna MUZIK mate v so main aaha Post pari te Sachii Dassa tu jo likhiya sahi likhiya vadhiya likhiya.par ik gall hor ke senti ni hona nahi ta main

 

[SherDil™]

Vaise Nav oye Aapna Signature Badal Lai Hun
Be Punjabi Not Gora Shora

 

[jattpunjabi]

sachi dassa tan ji ,mian apne future baare likhiya ,menu ni pata kidda likhia but tried my best

yaar haan kade apne future nu aina hola na banavi.........je tainu lagda ke tu bahar aa ke khush nai taan vapis chala ja......authe rahi jithe tera dil khush hove.......haan starting ch harek nu hi sangharash karna painda aa.......par thode jehe same pishon sabh theek ho janda.......haan jede student visa ya work visa ute aounde aa unha nu kaafi sangharash karna painda.......students utte jyada aukheyaai aoundi aa kyu ke unha ne padhna v hunda ate kamouna v hunda ate roti v banouni hundi.......par time naal theek ho janda........je veer sachi aa haalat hove taan sare vaapis mud jaan........koi vapas nai janda.........vapas ohi jande jinha nu ya taan kamm nai milda ya koi hor kaaran hunda........time paa ke har student v set ho janda..........main khud kai students nu sangharash karde hoye vekiya........ate ustou baad aithe set hunde hoye v........hun mainu nai pata teri asal ch position ki aa?? ki tu bahar hai ya nahar aoun bare soch rea hain.......ho sakda tainu kise ne galat dassiya hove........par main aina hi akda yaar ke janta taan hi aoundi je kush haiga taan..........ik vaar sabh nu push ke vekh ke unha nu kedi gal da dukh aa aithe........ate je haiga taan vapis ja vadan...........veere jeda student v aithe aounda usnu starting ch aukdaan da sahmna karna hi painda.......par aukdaan v kattde han kyu? kyu ke oh sara kush ik limited time layi hunda.........unha nu pata hunda ke je asi aithe rahange taan hi fayde ch rahange........baki mera personal view taan ihi aa ke jo life tu poem ch biyaan kiti aa oh asal ch hai nai mittra.

 

[nav-3]

Vaise Nav oye Aapna Signature Badal Lai Hun
Be Punjabi Not Gora Shora

han han signature v badalda main 22,

 

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yaar haan kade apne future nu aina hola na banavi.........je tainu lagda ke tu bahar aa ke khush nai taan vapis chala ja......authe rahi jithe tera dil khush hove.......haan starting ch harek nu hi sangharash karna painda aa.......par thode jehe same pishon sabh theek ho janda.......haan jede student visa ya work visa ute aounde aa unha nu kaafi sangharash karna painda.......students utte jyada aukheyaai aoundi aa kyu ke unha ne padhna v hunda ate kamouna v hunda ate roti v banouni hundi.......par time naal theek ho janda........je veer sachi aa haalat hove taan sare vaapis mud jaan........koi vapas nai janda.........vapas ohi jande jinha nu ya taan kamm nai milda ya koi hor kaaran hunda........time paa ke har student v set ho janda..........main khud kai students nu sangharash karde hoye vekiya........ate ustou baad aithe set hunde hoye v........hun mainu nai pata teri asal ch position ki aa?? ki tu bahar hai ya nahar aoun bare soch rea hain.......ho sakda tainu kise ne galat dassiya hove........par main aina hi akda yaar ke janta taan hi aoundi je kush haiga taan..........ik vaar sabh nu push ke vekh ke unha nu kedi gal da dukh aa aithe........ate je haiga taan vapis ja vadan...........veere jeda student v aithe aounda usnu starting ch aukdaan da sahmna karna hi painda.......par aukdaan v kattde han kyu? kyu ke oh sara kush ik limited time layi hunda.........unha nu pata hunda ke je asi aithe rahange taan hi fayde ch rahange........baki mera personal view taan ihi aa ke jo life tu poem ch biyaan kiti aa oh asal ch hai nai mittra.

thanx veer ,tu apne chote veer lai time kadiya te asal gall bare dasiya ,shuru shuru vich tan hunda ,meri v shuruaat hai ,thnx frm da bottom of my heart veer

 

[jattpunjabi]

thanx veer ,tu apne chote veer lai time kadiya te asal gall bare dasiya ,shuru shuru vich tan hunda ,meri v shuruaat hai ,thnx frm da bottom of my heart veer

u r welcum dear.......bus ik gall chete rakhi kade himmat na haari.........ik jatt hunda na je wahi karda ustou aukha koi kamm nai.......siaalan diyan raatan ch sappan diyan siriyaan midhniyaa.........jeth harh di khri dopere khaal banoune ya daane kadne .........ustou aukha kush nai aa mittra..........bus dattiya reh........kush saal mehnat aate aukhoai de aa........ustou baad sari umar theek aa veer.........bus himmat na haari........ih 2-4 saal taan ayen langh jaane bus himmat na haari.

 

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u r welcum dear.......bus ik gall chete rakhi kade himmat na haari.........ik jatt hunda na je wahi karda ustou aukha koi kamm nai.......siaalan diyan raatan ch sappan diyan siriyaan midhniyaa.........jeth harh di khri dopere khaal banoune ya daane kadne .........ustou aukha kush nai aa mittra..........bus dattiya reh........kush saal mehnat aate aukhoai de aa........ustou baad sari umar theek aa veer.........bus himmat na haari........ih 2-4 saal taan ayen langh jaane bus himmat na haari.

veer main tuhadi gall dhiyaan vich rakhanga ,n i ll try my best

 

[shergillsonline]

Gudd Bai Buat kaim likhea

 

[nav-3]

Gudd Bai Buat kaim likhea

thnx bro.