~*!*~My Poems~*!*~

[Pardesan Punjaban]

Re: *~Soohe akhar~*

nice poem
Hun main kee kaha

 

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

Re: *~Soohe akhar~*

nice poem
Hun main kee kaha

 

[Niki_Grewal]

Re: *~Soohe akhar~*

mere te likh dioo

lolzzzz...ok ji theek hai..ikk baar millo ...fer likhuingi

 

[Niki_Grewal]

Re: *~Soohe akhar~*

Maaf karna Nikki mein janda ke eh tera thread hai par Sando ne baneti kiti hai tan man 'ch aaya ke teri shayari da salaam vi hoju te apni Sando vi khush hoju. Sando hun das vi dayi ki shayari kiven lagi!

Tere naina de boohe utte,
Dastak deke koi jagave tenu,
Kite hawa na samajh layin usnu,
Oh main hona...

Tere manje di puand ch,
Khada ho ke koi salhave tenu,
Khawab na samajh layin usnu,
Oh main hona...

Duniya di is bheed vich,
Picheyon koi bulave tenu,
Kite gair na samajh layin usnu,
Oh main hona...

Kaaliyan thandiyan raatan ch,
Parchavan je nazar koi aave tenu,
Kite chor na samajh layin usnu,
Oh main hona...

Suniaan-massania raahan ch,
Be-jaan sareer koi mil jave tenu,
Kite laash na samajh layin usnu,
Oh main hona...

(Juggu te sher sahib…aah hai chori da maal! Karlo jinni vi dishum bishum hun tusi karni chaunde ho…kadd lo jinniyan vi kaseran kaddniyaan chaunde ho!)

Mein eh shayari patta nahi kithe parhi si kujh mahine pehla, par bohat hi romantic laggi. Aas karda ke tuhanu sareyan nu vi bohat pasand aavegi.

Tuhade apna,

dj

Nikki, eh teri shayari da jawaab vi samaj layi moivation vaste, varna mein naraaz hoju!

barra sohna jawaab dita dj...per tuhada apna likhya hunda taan hor vi wadhya lagna si ...thnx waise

 

[Niki_Grewal]

Re: *~Soohe akhar~*

nikz....
too guud...read it once again

thnx Sp

 

[Niki_Grewal]

Re: *~Soohe akhar~*

nikko very well written, soohe akhra ch, loved it
hun main hor kuj nahi kehna, bass poem sohni si



te Dj tuhada chori da maal vi bahut sohna hai .....

thnx navu

 

[Niki_Grewal]

Meri mohabbat:

Judai mein shuru hui,
Judai mein jawa’n hui.

Judai mein hi giri sambhali,
Judai mein fanah hui.

Ye mohabbat thi ya judai ka,
tha be-rehm badla koi????????

Niki Grewal ( March1st, 2007)

 

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

aenni lambi poem???

oops, shud be serious here, btw very nicely written...par aedaan diyaan na likheya karo...mann udaas ho janda

 

[Niki_Grewal]

lolz...kuchh nahi yaar...ikk hor poem likh rahi si...i guess 12-14 lines likhiyan si...adhoori rehgi....hun jabardasti poora keran da dil nahi ker riha...dekhdi aan je baad ch mood banya oho jeha ...thnx for the appriciation.

 

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

lolz...kuchh nahi yaar...ikk hor poem likh rahi si...i guess 12-14 lines likhiyan si...adhoori rehgi....hun jabardasti poora keran da dil nahi ker riha...dekhdi aan je baad ch mood banya oho jeha ...thnx for the appriciation.

btw, sorry for disturbing........

 

[Niki_Grewal]

btw, sorry for disturbing........

thts ok...i ll complete thtone some other time

 

[~J@TT~]

Meri mohabbat:

Judai mein shuru hui,
Judai mein jawa’n hui.

Judai mein hi giri sambhali,
Judai mein fanah hui.

Ye mohabbat thi ya judai ka,
tha be-rehm badla koi????????

Niki Grewal ( March1st, 2007)

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hey Nikki
vadiya likya..

thonnu ik gal dassda...
je thonnu Mohabbat naal; enna he pyaar aa..

taan Bulle shah ne kiha aa...k
mohabbat da sawaad taan oh le gaye ...jihna di mohabbat adhuri reh gayii..

majae lo..
bohat majae ne ...bass explore karo..thoroughly

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

nice one
per bahut uddas

 

[Gabru_Gulab_Varga]

Chukki chal phatte Niki! >hug

 

[AnZel TearZ]

Meri mohabbat:

Judai mein shuru hui,
Judai mein jawa’n hui.

Judai mein hi giri sambhali,
Judai mein fanah hui.

Ye mohabbat thi ya judai ka,
tha be-rehm badla koi????????

Niki Grewal ( March1st, 2007)


Nice...........
something touchi....



Judai me tu hai,
Judai me tera nasha hai,
Judai kya mohabbat hai,
Aur yehi hai to,
humne tumse judai ki.....
bepanah judai ki hai.....
me(always)

 

[Niki_Grewal]

wowwwwwwwwww.....wht a perfect reply!...loved it...thanx ji

 

[AnZel TearZ]

wowwwwwwwwww.....wht a perfect reply!...loved it...thanx ji

ur change signature really nice one.............
me(always)

 

[Niki_Grewal]

ur change signature really nice one.............
me(always)

oh thank ju ji....mere khud de life experience ton banya...azmai hoi cheej hai ji

 

[AnZel TearZ]

oh thank ju ji....mere khud de life experience ton banya...azmai hoi cheej hai ji

achcha hai...........
to guruji peri panna............
esi achichi galla batate rahiye ji.......
So menu experiment na karna pade....


"Ek baar galti kare to insan"
"dusri bar vahi galati kare to fool"
"tisri bar kare to dur rahiyo nahi to u will suffer"

"if u say marriage made in heaven then definatly God believe in friendship"

me(always)

 

[Niki_Grewal]

hey,..nice thoughts