kade takde si do nain sanu chori chori

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Dosto eh oh sher aa jisnu main jinni vaari parda aa unni vaari akhiyaa cho paani aa jaanda aa.......... ajj tussi vi paro te samjh sakde ho te samjho......

kade takde si do nain sanu chori chori
ajj oh nain hor ho gaye
pehla dil kita sada chori
hun oh sade chit chor ho gaye
sade bin jo kadi na lainde si saah
ajj ohna layi asi gair ho gaye
sadi ek hasi nal jina de jalde si chirag
uhna layi ajj asi benoor ho gaye
main pucheya kyo ayye sadi jindgi ch tusi
oh ek sorry keh k bilkul bekasoor ho gaye
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[SherDil™]

ghaint aa ji thanxxxxxx

 

[amani23]

veer sher bahut sohna te eh padd kai manu kush pata bi lag geya kai tare nall kush hoya jaroor hai
tahi inha deeply likhya
kehnde ne na
jis tan laghe so hi jane
hun isde matlab isdi gehrai tare to vadhh kaun das sakda

 

[desi _kuri]

its very touching and sweet

 

[kudi_patole_wargi]

bahut sohniya lines ne veer..n jitho tak mainu lagda eh kamal heer ne punjabi virsa toronto ch eh lines boliyan c ..but tfs

 

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bahut sohniya lines ne veer..n jitho tak mainu lagda eh kamal heer ne punjabi virsa toronto ch eh lines boliyan c ..but tfs

haanji ohi lines aa bt...... dil nu chu jaandiyaa ne...........

 

[kudi_patole_wargi]

hunji dil nu chun waliya hi ne..te oh song v jehra ohne is line to baad gaya c...jihde piche ho gya shudai dilla mereya ohi cheez nikli parayi dila mereya


but ik gal always yaad rakheyo jehra past hunda oh mudd ke kade nahin aunda so ohnu bhula ke future bare sochan ch hi bhalayi aa...thonu dekh ke pata lagda ke dunghi satt khadi aa but cheti apne aap nu sambhalan ch hi sabh di bhalayi aa ..hope meri kahi gal thonu buri na lage

 

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hunji dil nu chun waliya hi ne..te oh song v jehra ohne is line to baad gaya c...jihde piche ho gya shudai dilla mereya ohi cheez nikli parayi dila mereya


but ik gal always yaad rakheyo jehra past hunda oh mudd ke kade nahin aunda so ohnu bhula ke future bare sochan ch hi bhalayi aa...thonu dekh ke pata lagda ke dunghi satt khadi aa but cheti apne aap nu sambhalan ch hi sabh di bhalayi aa ..hope meri kahi gal thonu buri na lage

nai ji tuhaddi gall da bilkul bura nai laggeya ...........
thanx ji...

 

[TaRaN.rbk]

awesome....veer g

 

[sunny240]

thnx 4 shring veer............

 

[reehaljaspreet]

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[Mansim]

bahot bahot vadia likhya

 

[TaRaN.rbk]

nice one bro..............

 

[toorboys]

22 veer ji bhoot bhoot wadyaa likhya ji

 

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thnxxxxxxxx guyz 4 likin itt

 

[darveshpreet]

main pucheya kyo ayye sadi jindgi ch tusi
oh ek sorry keh k bilkul bekasoor ho gaye
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Veer, yaar ena lines nu padh ke tan dil de taar chid gaye, bahut wadia share si, kade kuch apna likhya vi jarror padhai yaara, udeek rahegi....

 

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thankuu preet veere.......... apna likheya vi post karunga ik den....... bt aje nai.....

 

[P-a-r-d-e-s-i]

.............. boHUT bADIYA JI

 

[jaggi633725]

Re: kade takde si do nain sanu chori cho

nice.

 

[Rajat]

Re: kade takde si do nain sanu chori cho

nice..