Ik Intzaar

[Black Cat]

Kalleya beh main kra os din da intzaar
jis din sire chad jana sada pyaar
hatha vich lagu mehndi sade sohne yaar di
har raat baat pau fer ishq pyar di
sajjna nal fer sadi umra di sanjh pau
zindagi ta sadi fer dharti te swarg hou
rab agge sda bas ehio mang poune aa
umra lyi sajjna da saath asi choune aa
sheti sheti sadiya murada hon puriya
sheti muk jaan sade vich diya duriya
har roz rab da main shukrana krangi
es khushi lyi har dukh v main zrangi..

By - ~Kamaldeep Kaur~

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[Peterpal]

very well written kamaldeep kaur

kuwaare jazbaatan nu bahut vadia tarike naal pesh keeta

 

[Black Cat]

thnx

 

[riskyjatt]

nice ...................

 

[Dead Man]

wow bot sohna likh lende kamal tusi
keep it up

 

[Gill 22]

Very Nice

 

[Black Cat]

everyone...

 

[AmritNagra]

Nyc

 

[Black Cat]

Nyc

thnx for that, pr tusi sad face kyon bnaeya...?

 

[shanabha]

bohat vadiya likhya ji

badi mehrbaani kamal ji share karan layi.....

kuch vadiya padhan nu milya..te sikhan nu v

 

[<~Man_Maan~>]

bahut vadiya kamal ji

aa saadi dua rab aage thwade lyi



har reej sanjoyi teri rab poori kar deve,
aa chaa jo disde dil de chhad jaan eh sire,
KALLI khidi jo mahobat di eh PHULL ban jaave,
Tere Khawaban da raj kumar tenu ehna pyaar kare tu duniya bhull jaave ...

 

[Black Cat]

awww... thnq soooooooooooo much <~Man_Maan~> ji

 

[Black Cat]

bohat vadiya likhya ji

badi mehrbaani kamal ji share karan layi.....

kuch vadiya padhan nu milya..te sikhan nu v

thnq shanabha ji

 

[RaJ-VeeR]

oh ho ghaint likhiya

 

[Black Cat]

thnq...

 

[Parleen Kaur]

nicee

 

[userid97899]

Gud one

 

[Black Cat]

Thnx..