ساڈیاں اُداسیاں

[cheetah]

wow eh teh baut sohni shayeri ahhh tusi aap likhdee hoo wakhree cheetah jiiii
sadaa next sawaaal hoyeoo thodi autograf lai sakdee ahhh

jee sonia_nz jee aa main apo likhi ay hour we batheri shairi ay meri urdu wich tey punjabi wich.....PASAND KARAN DA SHUKRIA WADI MEHRBANI

 

[Sonia_Nz]

jee sonia_nz jee aa main apo likhi ay hour we batheri shairi ay meri urdu wich tey punjabi wich.....PASAND KARAN DA SHUKRIA WADI MEHRBANI

thodee kohlee teh bautt sohnaaa talent ahhh thnks ji thodaaaa apniiii shayeriaaa sadee naal shareee karnn laii
usssi teh shayeri di vadaa vahleee cooler bann gayee ahhh

 

[MeHRaM]

tery dukh dii barsaat
mukdey mukdey nain mukdi
Tery hijer dey ay kali raat
langdey langdey nain langdhi
main raat dey pichley peher which
tapdi shiker dopehr which
teri rahwan which khalowan
na main jagaan na main sowan(sleep)
pia wav roley wango
which thullan dey aidher udher pohwaan
aik wari tou murr khar nou aa ja
main we kitey sukh dee neender sowaan



ay jey utey likey hoi meri nazam jida naan ay sukh dee neender

bahut hi khoobsoorat likhia ih taan...bahut bahut shukria translation karan layee..... i appriciate ur efforts...plz hor v aun deo

 

[MeHRaM]

ehdi v translation kar deo hun

 

[jattpunjabi]

bahut vadhiya 22

 

[cheetah]

inj barbad keeta e pai bethi terian rahwan wekhaN

tere baajoun khali khali bas sunnian bahwann wekhann

udasiann ney bas mery he ghar da rasta mal lia hai

dhup which sarrdi lokann day sir tey chhaawann wekhann.

 

[cheetah]

punjabi ghazal
shamaa paiwan , rataan charrhan kadey na hovey sawera
soraj chamkey ,din carrhey,akhan agey rahway hanera

dunya dey gham waikh kay main kiyun apna seena sarran
asi hor gamann da ki karna iko tera gham bathera

warhey langey ched watna nou pardais ja wasia ain
aj we tenu wajan marey wehrrey da kacha banera

gham day carkhy tey bethi dukh da soot main katann
sham dee lali udas rahway naly cheekan mary hanera

hanjuaa de badal chaaiy tahir dukh dee barish wardhi
gham dee aug day shulay nachan pahria rahway char chafera

 

[cheetah]

ki dasaan mainn yaar
odhey wadey da itbaar
saanu lay dubia her war
kina sasta hoya aythey
sasi punu da piyaar
koi which thalaan day ruliaa
koi which chanha dey dubiyaa
koi dudh di nehr liyaya
kisi taj mehal banaya
kisi zehr da piyalaa pee key
apna piyar nabhayaa
oh kehnda see asi aan milaan gay
sahh sanbehey na jaan dilaan dwy
murr aj tak oh nai aaya
chan warga mukh nai dakhaya
koi wada kar key mukrey
kar devey dilaa dey tukrry
koi aapey bany deewar
ki dasann main yaar
ohdey wadey da itbaar
sanu ley dubya her war

 

[MeHRaM]

inj barbad keeta e pai bethi terian rahwan wekhaN

tere baajoun khali khali bas sunnian bahwann wekhann

udasiann ney bas mery he ghar da rasta mal lia hai

dhup which sarrdi lokann day sir tey chhaawann wekhann.

HTIS ONE IS ULTIMATE ........THANKS FO TRANSLATION...TUSSI BAHUT BAHUT VADIA LIKHDE HO CHEETHA JI
PLZ KEEP COMIN

 

[jattpunjabi]

bahut vadhiya ghazala

 

[simar]

hmmm yeah

 

[cheetah]

:fwl :fwl :fwl thanks all

 

[cheetah]

honi dil dey bohey thou key

bey chain bethy aan roo key

fair teri yaad satawan aa gai ay

lahoo dey athroo rawawan aa gai ay

daso meno main ki karann

odhi yaad tey jind nu khaa gai ay

jehrri sut key rah which turr gai si

akhann which athroo pehr gai si

jidey baduo jind wi her gai si

mery dil tey zakhmaa day teer calawan aa gai ay

odhi yaad fair menu aa gai ay

 

[cheetah]

Gar chaand raat ko dekh leta tera muskarata chehra
Kuch aur bhi khil jaty meri eid kay rang
tery aa janey say baharoon ka gumaan hota mujhko
khudbakhud hi sanwar jatey meri eid kay rang​

 

[cheetah]

HTIS ONE IS ULTIMATE ........THANKS FO TRANSLATION...TUSSI BAHUT BAHUT VADIA LIKHDE HO CHEETHA JI
PLZ KEEP COMIN

ki faida reply taa koi karda nai?????????​

 

[MeHRaM]

ki faida reply taa koi karda nai?????????​

bai nahi eh gal ni hai....vekho tuhaade thread nu sirf 57 reply lagge ne par views 530 ho chukke ne ....ehda matlab aa v sabb janta padh di jroor aa tuhaadian poems......infact main v padh da haan.....but we cant write same things every time....ke vadia likhde ho vadia... likhde ho.......par haan je kisse nu kujh vadia lagge kujh special taan oh appriciate v kar janda....but all ur poems were gud :D......so hor aun deo

 

[cheetah]

her roz sham di lali
meno aa key kehndi ay
teri zindgi
kiyu ini chup chup rehndi ay
na koi hala gula
na koi shor sharaba
kiyu ani khamoshi ay
kiyo ani madhoshi ay
anj jindri na ghol way saayan
chup da roza khol way saayan
monhu kuj ta bol way saayan
ki onhu main dasann yaro
oh ki samjehy
oh ki janey
chup da roza kivay kholaa
kivay monhu kuj main bolaan
bol pia tey ik zalam nay
saarey jag which badnam ho jana ​

 

[cheetah]

maan​

odhey baajo
teri dunya which khudaya
sukh di koi thaan nai labhdi
haarr di dhup which sir sarr jandy
thandi mithi koi chaan nai labhdi
sab nu hiku gal aakhy tahir
ay dey hukam nu
na ik tou doja karo
jay ho sakey taa
rab tu baad
aidhi poja karo
ik wari jay tur jaway
fair murr kay
mithri maan nai labhdi​

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

waht wadiya aa ji
feeling noo bahut wadiya likhia
mithi maa nahi labhdi

 

[MeHRaM]

her roz sham di lali

meno aa key kehndi ay
teri zindgi
kiyu ini chup chup rehndi ay
na koi hala gula
na koi shor sharaba
kiyu ani khamoshi ay
kiyo ani madhoshi ay
anj jindri na ghol way saayan
chup da roza khol way saayan
monhu kuj ta bol way saayan
ki onhu main dasann yaro
oh ki samjehy
oh ki janey
chup da roza kivay kholaa
kivay monhu kuj main bolaan
bol pia tey ik zalam nay

saarey jag which badnam ho jana ​

cheeteh bai bahut hi khoob likhian ne dove poems.....thanks heaps for sharing......

tu aha zalam word kiss layee use keetaa....mainu ih last walian lines samaj ni ayian...jaan fer tu koi hor word use kar sakda c instead of that