meri second poem.lolzzzzzzzzzz

[Pardesan Punjaban]

Good one!! Sab khair aa?? Pakki gal??

Darna ka nahi, draane aa.. :D

Do what you wanna do, not what everyone expects you to do. Always follow your heart.. it will show you the path that will make you happy... and those who love you can only be happy if you are happy. EnjoY!! Remain Blessed.

thaks aa ji
kujh gadbad nahi jadon hoyie das dena main;an

theek aa dara devage je nah dare tahnoo lae jaana

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

ssa, your punjabi sher 'ehna akhiya ch yadaa kiven............' that's really lovely and nice. and that made me join so that i can comment on that but after joining i found u have put a lot of poems in here. thats really nice. if u don't mind i wanna ask do u write them on ur own and who inspire you o write them? an is it possible to check all u have written in here or anywhere else, i wanna read them all. do let me know.
cheers

thanks aa ji pasand karn laie

haan ji ih mere hee shatiani brain da kam aa
main app hee likhia
bas je dil kita kee main vi poet ban ke dekha seious jihi so likh ditan

yeh for sure je kade hor likh hpyie te ithe hee paa deni
per mera brain inna kam nahi karda

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

naah mere naal chal sandy je darr lagda taan

ki khyall ae


vaise poem sohni si

theek aa ji jadon marzi lae javo
thanks je pasand ayie

 

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

main ih kida likh layie si

 

[❤ ❤ ❤Jalebi❤ ❤ ❤]

beautifulllllllllllllllll......

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

thanks aa sis g??????????????????????

 

[jaggi633725]

nice.