Ksoor ye tha k. . .

[ash_haaz]

Ae khuda kya sza di hai toone
''Ash'HaaZ'' ko dard-e-tanhayi
de kar.
...
Ksoor ye tha k tere bnayi insaan
ko tujh se jiyada chaah baithe..
.
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[Sukh chahal]

Rbb naal bgawat....

 

[ash_haaz]

Rbb naal bgawat....

yo tahi sza v khatarnak mili sukh ji . .

 

[Sukh chahal]

Hasar e bgawat mila bhi to kya...
baaghi the...aur baaghi hein...
baaghian nu ki szawan...
ohh tn beparwah hunde ne

 

[ash_haaz]

Hasar e bgawat mila bhi to kya...
baaghi the...aur baaghi hein...
baaghian nu ki szawan...
ohh tn beparwah hunde ne

nyc LYNS ji.
.
.
.
N one thing i noticed . K first two lines hindi ch ne n last two punjabi . . .ae mix poetry aw? ? :P

 

[Sukh chahal]

Hindi lines poetry aa

n punjabi lines oh saade apne anmol vichaar ne....

shayr lokan nu vichaar v shayri e lgdi aa

 

[ash_haaz]

Hindi lines poetry aa

n punjabi lines oh saade apne anmol vichaar ne....

shayr lokan nu vichaar v shayri e lgdi aa

klol hogi ae ta. Hahaha.
.
Uda vichar v att sun ji . .
:P

 

[Sukh chahal]

Att nhi atti uttam....

 

[ash_haaz]

Att nhi atti uttam....

kida same e aaw. :P

 

[Sukh chahal]

Eda kida same e aa...
atti uttam tn sunan ch v sohna lgda aa

 

[Sukh chahal]

ok ji...
nice to txt u...
vicahaare khuda nu bksh deyo ajj...

gud nyt

 

[ash_haaz]

Eda kida same e aa...
atti uttam tn sunan ch v sohna lgda aa

ya ae ta hai . Bt

att kehda dandiya vad da ? ?

 

[Sukh chahal]

U tn gal ka khehda hi nhi shddte shayrr lok...
att e saaru se...

 

[ash_haaz]

U tn gal ka khehda hi nhi shddte shayrr lok...
att e saaru se...

hahahahaha.
Vadde lok kalap gye. .chalo apa thodi man lainde jida uh kehnde ho. . Hehe

 

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