kaatil sarkaaran nu............

[aman sidhu]

sir jhukaunda haan 'bhagat seyan' tere jehe sardaran nu
aakh cho paani aaj v wagg turda, padh soorveeran diyan waaran nu
par ajj chor, katil te blatkaari hi milde ne,padh k vekho j aakhwaaran nu
paisa hi sabb ho geya, aag laggi aa desh pyaran nu
shariff da jeona mushkil ho geya, khull poori aa gunahgaaran nu
ghar ta gall door di rahi, roti mildi ni gareeb pariwaaran nu
narak ban reha e desh saada, sharam aaundi ni kaatil sarkaaran nu
apne desh ch hi je job mile,koi kyon jaave sarhadd paaran nu
raaz karvaunde ne ethe lok saade kaum ch sire de gardaaran nu
j mauka mile..ta 'aman' ne fook dena, kaale rang de ehna wpaaran nu

 

[·!¦[·η.є.н.α·]¦!·]

menu kuj v samajh ni lagda.. ki lihyaa aa

 

[Palang Tod]

fonts thik nahi gal rhe...............

 

[aman sidhu]

o ji words di clearty ni hai .koi ni main eng ch type kar ke tuhanu send kar davanga

 

[RUPIND3R]

nice aa 22......

 

[·!¦[·η.є.н.α·]¦!·]

ghar ta gall door di rahi, roti mildi ni gareeb pariwaaran nu
narak ban reha e desh saada, sharam aaundi ni kaatil sarkaaran nu

bhot wadiyaa likhyaa aman

 

[Palang Tod]

kya baat aa veer nahi resa teriya .......

 

[snoopy_amli]

wah wah ...poem hi likhde k kuch krna ve ae sudhrn lee??

 

[aman sidhu]

wah wah ...poem hi likhde k kuch krna ve ae sudhrn lee??

kyon nai j ...jitho takk hundi aa koshish,,karde haan...bakki tamana ta hai hi

 

[snoopy_amli]

^^ i salute this spirit...ithe muh feran ton jadi jruri ya ihnu badlo

 

[aman sidhu]

^^ i salute this spirit...ithe muh feran ton jadi jruri ya ihnu badlo

thanks............

 

[Heer Majajjan]

tfs................

 

[.::singh chani::.]

nice tfs.....