jindgi in words. .

[.::singh chani::.]

school jane me dar lagta tha,
aj har rasta khud hi
chunte h.........
.... kbhi ma-baap ki har
baat sacchi lagti thi,
aj unhi ko har pal jhut bolte h.........
..... pariyon ki kahani ki
jagah raat ko chat
karna zyada pasand h.........
.. pehle 1st aane k liye
pure saal padte the, aj pass hone ko tarste h.........
..... cartoons nhi,ab reality
shows achhe lagte h.........
..... kbhi chhoti si chot
kitna rulati thi,
aj dil tut jaata hai fir bhi sambal jate h.........
... pehle dost bs sath
khelne tak yad rehte the,
aj kuch dost jaan se zyada
pyare lagte h.........
... ek din tension ka meaning maa se puchna pda tha,
or aj tension soulmate lagta h.........
..... 1din tha jb pal me ladna
pal me manana to roz ka kaam
tha,
aj to 1bar juda hue to fir rishte tak kho jate h.........
... sach me zindagi ne bhut kuch
sikha dia
na jane kb hume itna bada bana
diya..

 

[miteshinder]

wah 22 sachi zindgi nu well define kita hai
super like

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

NICE ONE.. moved to Hindi Poetry

 

[#m@nn#]

nice...

 

[.::singh chani::.]

thanx frnd for lhke nd cmpliment

 

[ѕραятαη σƒ ℓσνєツ]

Great one g

 

[*Sippu*]

sohna likheya

bt cartoons nhi,ab reality
shows achhe lagte h.........
eh gal galt paah diti oye

 

[atulraj]

nice one frnds

 

[.::singh chani::.]

sippu g galat . . . . . Kyo ki hoea tu c cartoon dekhde oh kia j galat likhia ta m sry g vase tuc sugest kro ki likha ethe

 

[Admirer.Punjab]

Nice lines. U reminded me of "Ye daulat bhi le lo, ye shohrat bhi le lo......woh kagaz ki kashti wo barish ka pani"