few lines dat touched my heart...

[munda_wakhre_type_da]

well i love literature and poetry bt dese days main poetry bot kat parhda ya sunda haan coz aj kal harek banda 2 peg laake shayar bani firda..

bt aa kuch linaan mere aadi ne mainu bhejiyaa and i really liked dem.. felt like sharin dese with u guys..

hope u guys like dese too..


Bachpan K Dukh Bhi Kitne Ache The
Tub Tu Sirf Khilonne Toota Karte The..

Woh Khushian Bhi Kaisi Khushian Thi
Titli K Par Noch Kar Uchlla Karte The..

Paon Mar K Khud Barish K Pani Mai
Apni Nao App Daboya Karte The..

Ab Tu Aik Ansuon Bhi Ruswa Kar Jata Hai
Bachpan Mai Dil Khol K Roya Karte The ..
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[Pardeep]

nice

 

[jas_jøgåñ]

sachi heart touching lines ne tfs...

 

[munda_wakhre_type_da]

main lagda kal raati khaadi peeti ch baadi feel legeya ..

 

[jas_sandhu]

sahi gal bai..sacheoo feel le gyaa jada...:

 

[Sonia_Nz]

tu khadii peeti vichhh hi posttt kariyaaa karrrr
kyaaa baaat keh gayeeee sachi muchii meineee bhi esss poem peh ek ansooo donate kiyaaaaa

 

[munda_wakhre_type_da]

sahi gal bai..sacheoo feel le gyaa jada...:

bt veere linan ta kaem ne jo marji kaho
tera reply parhke hor v jaleel ja feel kar reya
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[Palang Tod]

v nice guri 22 g...............

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

nice............

 

[Johal]

wah gg wadiya lina ne

 

[•°¤*(¯`° (sîmrãñ) °´¯)*¤°]

kyaa baat ae ji kyaa baat​

 

[umang26]

last line !

 

[Rajat]

nice..

 

[jaggi633725]

bahut vadiya

 

[mittalramit4u]

not mere words, but the entire world of emotions, so close to heart. thanks buddy.

 

[Bhaarat ki Mitti]

vadiya veere

 

[ALONE]

gr8..................

 

[jattidajatt]

nice.....

 

[kanjjar]

tfs........