eh udeek kadon mukni?

[Prince ♥ LKS]

friends eh meri pehli poetry hai
likhan di inspiration mainu is website to hi mili si

te jide vaste likh reha haan o mera pehla pyaar hai jo ajj vi mere tu door hai.
nai nai russi nai hai o,
mai aje dasya nai ohnu.

meri shayariyan te poetriya tuanu changi lagiya ki nahi zaroor dasna .
koi pull chuk hove taan 100ry, aje newbie haan.



TERE MITTHE BOL YAAD AUNDE NE REH REH KAR

MERI ANKHIYAN UDEEK DIYAAN TAINU YAAD KAR KAR

MAI AKK GIYA TAINU LABH LABH KAR

TU MILANGI KITTHE DAS DE HUN SUPNE 'CH AAKAR

 

[jaggi633725]

nice
best of luck tuhanu tuada pehla pyar mil jave

 

[Prince ♥ LKS]

Thank u bhrava

 

[Palang Tod]

v nice...........

 

[aman sidhu]

vadiya aa 22...

 

[preet cheema]

all the best dear 4 ur love...................