Dil Baaz Na Aave..........

[smartsurd2004]

My 1st Post :---------------



Ni tu baddi hi be-Lehaz ki kariye,
Ni tu baddi hi dil saaz ki kariye,
Sanu pata hai tere pyaar ch paike kuch nahi milna
par dil fer vi na aave baaz ki kariye

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

nice.. keep it up..
Please go through the poetry rules once.
https://www.unp.me/f30/rules-poetry-section-106023/

 

[smartsurd2004]

kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk i can read

 

[ѕραятαη σƒ ℓσνєツ]

nice 22 g

 

[#m@nn#]

niceeeee

 

[harman03]

good 1

 

[JUGGY D]

nice ji