bad-zaat zaat,,be-dard mard

[jatt punjabi]

reshmi ji gall sahi kiti hai ji tusi,par kuch auratan ajehi v hundian han jina nu pyar nall koi wasta nahi hunda.sahiba nev odon sahi kita c bilkul sahi te nahi keh sakde par sahi kita c ohne kionki je mirja ohde bharawan nu mar dinda ta ohdian bhabhian vidhwa ho janni c ohna de bache anath ho jande ,is nall kinia hi jindgian tabah ho jannia san kionki mirja de teeraan de nishne bahut pake san te oh kise nu na chadda,tusi bahut sohna likhiya .keep it up

 

[jatt punjabi]

Teer tod ke sahiba ne, zindagi mirje di gawai,
Ik di maut kara ke, jaan sattan de bachai .
Je tore na hunde teer sahiban ne,
rehndi na suhagan ik vi bharjai .
Maadi sahiba ne nahi kiti,
ae ta honi ne karwai.
Maadi sahiba ta akhwaundi, je hundi apni jaan bachai.
Naal yaar de ap ve marke, sahiba ta sachi preet nibhai.

 

[pps309]

Gaane aale ne apne gaane bechane aa.........

Kaun Changa kaun maara aa ta Rabb hi janda.......har bande de apne apne karam hunde aa...koi change karam karda koi maade.........

So bandya nu marra kehna ya teemiya nu marra kehna galat aa........
Balmiki jo ki kade chor hunda siga.....baad ch Ramayan v likh gaya te hun lok yaad karde aa osde change karma nu......

 

[Johal]

as always Apninder gg Bhaut sohna likhiaa tusiii

u rearlly have a talent n its very niceee.

rest all 5 fingures are not same.

har pase kuj changa te ku mara wi hai
is lai asi kise nu doshh nai de sakdee,

baki jiwe param bai ne kiha ki ganne wallian ne te ganne bechaneee aa

 

[smilly]

apninder ji bhut vadiyaa....

param 22 ji ate johal 22 ne tik keha
is duniyaa vich vakhre-vakhre sabha de bande ne .....
Koi banda hai bade chavaan naal.. Koi vigaad ke majaa manda hai...

Par tusi bhut vadiyaa vichar rakhde ho. Ate appaa kise nu badal ni sakde bas us nu ignore kar sakde haan.........

 

[killerd]

bahut Vadiya likhya hai



mard anha hai anhi hai gal karda, ihne aaurtan kadon pashania ve,
har tha te aaurat te dosh lagda, kadon keemtan mard ne janian ve,


Par sare mard ve eho jahe nahi hunde


Je ek sahiba karke sari aurat jaat nu badnaam nahi keha ja sakda taan ek geet karke sari mard jaat nu ve badnaam nahi kita ja sakda



shayad tusi bhul gaye ke manak ne hi Maa hundi a Maa,Rabba bhen kare arzoyi warge geet gaye ne jithe usne aurat de praise kite hai

 

[reshmi_mutiyar]

thnxxxxxxx a lot every1 for your comments

 

[ALONE]

nice..............!

 

[reshmi_mutiyar]

nice..............!

thnxxxxxxxxx a lot dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

 

[Ravivir]

Sat bhara ik MIRZA baki kissa kara ne
kali SAHIBA buri bana ti mard hazara ne
Kavian di is galti nu kinven sudhar diya
Apne hise di duniya main tetho vaar diya


Eh khichotan taan chaldi rahni hai APNINDER JI.Asal vich ik eho jiha samay vi aunda hai ki admi nu dard sahna changa lagan lagda.dara taan ik chhanana hai jihra admi di rooh chhan dinda hai. Jindagi de sare nichor kad dinda hai.

 

[reshmi_mutiyar]

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bilkul sahi kiha tusi dear,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,bohut sohna point

 

[pps309]

Sat bhara ik MIRZA baki kissa kara ne
kali SAHIBA buri bana ti mard hazara ne
Kavian di is galti nu kinven sudhar diya
Apne hise di duniya main tetho vaar diya


Eh khichotan taan chaldi rahni hai APNINDER JI.Asal vich ik eho jiha samay vi aunda hai ki admi nu dard sahna changa lagan lagda.dara taan ik chhanana hai jihra admi di rooh chhan dinda hai. Jindagi de sare nichor kad dinda hai.

Bohat vadia likhya 22 Ji

 

[reshmi_mutiyar]

 

[jaggi633725]

nice.

 

[gavie_bhri]

ajj pehli vaar mein ikk geet suniya,,YAARO RANNA CHANCHAL HAARIAN, KI RANNA DA ITTVAAR,,IHHE DINNE DARRAN PARCHAAVION,, RAATEEN NADIYAN KARDIYAN PAAR,,,, jiss geet ch aaurat waste shri hardev dalgir (lekhak dev tharikewala) ne gaalan hi gaalan likhiyan,, geet sohna aa,, per offensive aa,, oss geet nu compliments v samjhiya jaa sakda aa,, par aaurat 365 chalittar nahi aa,,,,,

shri dalgir ji nu jawab aa mera,,,,,,,kafi lamba aa,,, plzzz sara parrio,,,,,,,,,,give your comments plzz,,,,,,,,,,,,


kanu likh likh bhejda mehnia nu, kade geet kade kahaniya ve,
tahne tohmtan dushmana la la ke, paaven pani de wich madhaania ve,
mard anha hai anhi hai gal karda, ihne aaurtan kadon pashania ve,
har tha te aaurat te dosh lagda, kadon keemtan mard ne janian ve,

jekar aaurat ne anbhol hi hass lita, ihda haasa na mard to jhal hoya,
aakh chuk ke dekhiya je kidhre, uddon mard de seene ch shal hoya,
ih c massla koyee aanant wala, jehra kade na kisse to hal hoya,
aaurat badhi hai payee majboorian di, ihhi dekh na mard to khal hoya,

kade puchda oye marda tu haal sada, assin dassde kinna behaal hoy,
tu ta kadh laina-e dil di bhaaf sari, assin andaron andrin halal hoy,
kinne seene de wich shek hoy, sade kolon na kite dikhaal hoy,
kon samajh da-e aaurat de dardan nu, mard sada hi mard de naal hoy,

tarle mintan kar kar lakh waari, pa pa waste kadhein la-hoorian ve,
dagga, dhokhe, faraib diya fandhiya oye, piya parkhda kaalian te boorian ve,
tere apne andar v hai khot marda, tahion lagdian dillan wich doorian ve,
sade hathon hi kha kha choorian tu, piya saanu hi vatda ghoorian ve,

ihho mard da hi dastoor siga, assin tur gaye jithe tu tor dita,
assin kat de aa zindagi chup reh ke, kade v kisse na gal te zor ditta,
dil tera c tenu hi saump ditta, jism hor da c hor layee khor dita,
wichon sakhna jiha wazood sada, bhora bhora kar ke bhor dita,

jihna raahan nu ajj piyan kosda-e, ohna raahan hi tenu pyar ditta,
tu te sanu hi aakhda-365 challitar, assin apaa v taithon vaar dita,
china china kar dil de rah tere, vangaa tuttiyan vaal khilaar ditte,
apninder vand ke pyar te mamta nu, sare jag de karz uttaar ditte,,,,,

panje ungllan iko jihea nahi hundae

 

[jass_cancerian]

superbbbbbbbb bohut khoob ji

 

[b punjabi]

kehri kehri line di tareef karan ek ek akhar sach pia akhda e
mainu ne pata c dil ander othe ekbhambar pia machda oye

ssa apninder ji

 

[reshmi_mutiyar]

kehri kehri line di tareef karan ek ek akhar sach pia akhda e
mainu ne pata c dil ander othe ekbhambar pia machda oye

ssa apninder ji

sat sri akaal ji--------thnksssss ji comment layi menu nahi pata c ki tuhade kol ithe already account haga

 

[lovelyboy17]

jekar aaurat ne anbhol hi hass lita, ihda haasa na mard to jhal hoya,
aakh chuk ke dekhiya je kidhre, uddon mard de seene ch shal hoya,
ih c massla koyee aanant wala, jehra kade na kisse to hal hoya,
aaurat badhi hai payee majboorian di, ihhi dekh na mard to khal hoya


bahut he sohna apninder ji ....

main ta ji muridd ho gia tuhadi shyari da ......

 

[b punjabi]

Apninder ji ehnu puchhna c eh maa da jammia j maa da jamia te maa de challitter das sakda besharam admi