Akhiyaan

[gill_di_dunalli]

Kado avenga ve mahiya,
raula ,a paun akhiyan..
.
teri yaad jadon aave,
harhh ,a vahaun akhiyan..
.
tere mur partan di,
aasaan ,a jagaun akhiyaan..
.
teri photo vekh ke,
sehm ,a jaan akhiyaan..
.
hove jikr jithe tera,
uthh ,a jaan akhiyaan..
.
vekh ke jorhiyaan hor,
jhukk ,a jaan akhiyaan..
.
rahe vasda jithe v rahe,
eho ,a chahoun akhiyaan..
.
eh akhiyan ni mann diya,
main samjha thakkiyaan..
.
tuhi aa ke kite samjha mahiya,
main ena akhiyaan da dard
na vandaa sakiyaan..........

 

[Black Cat]

nice...
gill saab plz mention name of the poet below ur poem... check poetry rules

 

[gill_di_dunalli]

ehe main likhi aa ghanta laa ke
tenu pasand ayi.....?

 

[Black Cat]

yup, it's nice....

 

[$hokeen J@tt]

nice one

please mention ur name at the end

 

[preet_singh]

nice one

please mention ur name at the end

end ch likhde no mention

 

[$hokeen J@tt]

end ch likhde no mention

 

[preet_singh]

^^^

 

[#Jatt On Hunt]

nyccc...