~~Yar Rusya~~

[.::BaD~MiStEr::.]

My First Attempt in Punjabi Poetry !!
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Yar rusya Rub Rusya..
Sada Tan Rusya Sada Man Rusya..
Tere Ishq vichore Pa Ditay..
Tu Zulm Asan tay Wad Kita..
Tu Mur Kadi Gera Paya na..
Tairi Rah wich Ro Ro Akhan nu Tar Kita..
Mere Tan Ander Mere man ander..
Teri Yaad Day Dewe Balday nay..
Tu ki jane Way Bhaliye Naray..
Din Raat Sooli tay langaday nay..
Din Raat Sooli tay langaday nay..

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

good one.. keep it up..

 

[Pinkiee]

really good

 

[jjjajjjmjjjajjjnjjj]

Good one

 

[nvkhkhr]

gud JI

 

[Android]

good one

 

[$hokeen J@tt]

Nice one ji

Keep it up......

 

[Ak47_Riskykz]

Punjab di khushboo aundi teri shayri vichon

Bahoot wadhiya ! likhiya

 

[.::BaD~MiStEr::.]

Punjab di khushboo aundi teri shayri vichon

Bahoot wadhiya ! likhiya

Thanks For this compliment bro

 

[*Ghudia*]

Sohna likheya

vaise Tairi < ki hunda ?

 

[*Genius*]

Very nice

 

[.::BaD~MiStEr::.]

Thank You All For Your Comments !

 

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