Niki_Grewal said:u ...per poem sohni aa keep it up
bas rehan de ched na darda nu ...... ja na kro...... koi dard ni mjaak kardi haan.....
Niki_Grewal said:u ...per poem sohni aa keep it up
Angel_Eyes said:Nice poem .............bobble, kite kite tuhadiyan likhiya poems shayad kise na kise de naal relate ho jandiya ne
J@tti said:I love it.. amazing!
jatti_sydney said:
Pardesan Punjaban said:good one bhene
bilkul sahi kiha
achha ji....taanhi dilon poems nikaldiyan ne....bina yaad kite ...udhan poem sohni hai
Bhuaa bahut sohna likheya as always........
kitaab publish karni paini jaldi ......