Unp te poem..:)

[P-_-u-_-n-_-j-_-a-_-b]

thnx veer ji

 

[sandeepsingh]

ghaint hai jee....

 

[P-a-r-d-e-s-i]

hahahha kmaal kar ditti tu ...............

 

[Ak47_Riskykz]

Kyaa baat hai veer ji!

Sirre la ditti

Bahut hi khoob likhiya aa veer!

 

[H4RVI SINGH]

nice

 

[Ak47_Riskykz]

Te Kayi firde ne AK47(Ak47_Riskykz) Chalayi mitro,

 

[Loveangel]

Very nice

 

[P-_-u-_-n-_-j-_-a-_-b]

thnx mitro tuhanu sareya nu pasand ayi.

 

[Lily]

awww..veryy nice deepuu jii

 

[P-_-u-_-n-_-j-_-a-_-b]

Thnx ji...

 

[Justpunjabi]

Nice poem dear
keep it up

 

[chardi kala vich rhiye]

deepu ne krati balle balle

baaki saare thalle thalle...................

jeunda wasda reh bai..............fatte chakkeyo aa.....................

 

[→ ✰ Dead . UnP ✰ ←]

Amazingggggggggggg

really very nice jus no words abt ur poem

Thanks Alot

 

[Sourabh]

nice work davinder u did a great job bai

 

[Pardeep]

wow...pappu (deepu) pass ho gya

 

[P-_-u-_-n-_-j-_-a-_-b]

chalo 22 tusi kar dita pass

 

[Pardeep]

hon 1 daru de botal te nal murga bhej davo...nahe te no fer kat lane

 

[P-_-u-_-n-_-j-_-a-_-b]

hahahaha..... yaar 22 tu ta sade math wale sir wangu pass karda. oh v botal naal maan janda c

 

[desi_grl_is_bac]

vry byc................tfs

 

[Ginny]

bada touch siga yaara