Takdeer......

[Gobind Sharma]

Husan kahe main sab to wadda,

Meri khalkat sobha kardi.

Paisa kahe main sab to wadda,

Mera duniya paani bhardi.

Akal kahe main sab to waddi,

Ja vich kachehri lardi.

"Takdeer" kahe tusi saare jhuthe,

Main jo chaundi ohi kardi...

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[Faizullapuria-Rai]

22 bahut vadia te sachia lines ne

 

[Gobind Sharma]

22 bahut vadia te sachia lines ne

meharbani janab ji........

 

[Saini Sa'aB]

nice lines

 

[harman03]

Nice 1

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

nice one.

 

[*Sippu*]

so true!

 

[MAVERICK]

nice lines..but dont quite agree with these

 

[JUGGY D]

ਪਰ ਜੱਗੀ ਕਿਹੰਦਾ ਓਹ ਵਾਹਿਗੁਰੂ ਵੱਡਾ..
ਜਿਹਨੇ ਇਹ ਦੁਨਿਆ ਸਾਰੀ ਘੜਤੀ...

 

[binder77]

sach keha hai