Shiv's Poetry

[J@tti]

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[J@tti]

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[J@tti]

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[Guest33]

for the wonderful thread...kithe gawachi hai J@TTIi ?

 

[J@tti]

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[Angel_Eyes]

Nice thread jattiye...........Thankyou for it..........you are awesome

 

[J@tti]

for the wonderful thread...kithe gawachi hai J@TTIi ?

anytime, gwachna kithe aa, books wapis karnia kai june 11 nu, so khatam karnian pehla pehla

 

[J@tti]

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[J@tti]

Nice thread jattiye...........Thankyou for it..........you are awesome

You are always welcum.

 

[Je Jatt Bidak Gaya]

thank you for every post j@tti!!!!!!!

 

[MeHRaM]

my favt ​

ਤਕਦੀਰ ਤਾਂ ਅਪਣੀ ਸੌਂਕਣ ਸੀ
ਤਦਬੀਰਾਂ ਸਾਥੋਂ ਨਾ ਹੋਈਆਂ
ਕਿੰਜ ਝੰਗ ਛੁਟਿਆ ਕਿੰਜ ਕੰਨ ਪਾਟੇ
ਚੁੰਡ ਲੰਗ ਗਿਆ ਇੰਜ ਹੀ ਹੀਰਾਂ ਦਾ
ਕੀ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਕਿਸੇ ਮੁਕੱਦਰ ਸੀ
ਇਹ ਹੱਥ ਦੀਆਂ ਚਾਰ ਲਕੀਰਾਂ ਦਾ
ਕੀ ਪੁਛਦੇ ਓ ਹਾਲ ਫਕੀਰਾਂ ਦਾ
ਸਾਡਾ ਨਦੀਓ ਵਿਛੜੇ ਨੀਰਾਂ ਦਾ

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mainu net te labhi ne je kisse nu labhi taan poori pa deo​

 

[Angel_Eyes]

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this one is my fav.......i love the lines in it, pata nah kyon mainu is poem ch bahut saara dard jeha dikhda te soch jehi aundi ki jiven shiv apniya kavitaava ch duniya de dukh samaun di koshish karda hi chala gaya...........Thanks for sharing jatttiye, although i had real this one like a million times online before, but i love it everytime i read it

 

[jaggi633725]

very nice

 

[Rajat]

nice..

 

[.::singh chani::.]

nice tfs......