satbir di good poetry

[jattpunjabi]

ik kudi aa satbir kaur........bot vadhiya likhdi hai.......usdian kujh vadhiyap[oetry


asin jiyonde rahe ohna de didaar laye,
par didar na ho sake.
jad maran lagge haan tan,
dil apne nu sambhaal na sake.
enna pyaar ho geya saanu,
k asin ant tak dil samjha na sake.
par hale v sajjna di hai udeek sanu,
asin apni kismat v changi pa na sake.
hun oh sama aa geya jad asin sajjna de didar laye tarsde tarsde hi mar
gaye..

 

[jattpunjabi]

asin ronde rahe gairan nu apna samajh k,
saanu apna keh k v oh gair bana gaye.
asin karde rahe intizaar rahan vich,
dekho naseeb saade....
asin ikalleyan hi khade reh gaye.
kiwen bhulawan yaad ohna di,
jad yaadan dil saade vich chadd gaye.
hun main karan tan ki,
asin tan zindgi gairan apniyan de naam kar gaye.

 

[jattpunjabi]

Pyaar tere vich injh rangi gaye,
Jiwen koi khoobsurat titli howan.
Khadi haan aapne pyaar de maan vich ,
Jiwen uchha koi parbat howan.
Karke tainu yaad wagan mere nain,
Jiwen koi wagda dareya howan.
Ankhan di chamak injh lagge,
Jiwen vakhre jahaan da vakhra chann howan.
Karke yaad tainu dil khush hunda,
Jiwen bullan tereyan di muskaan howan.
Dil karda tere vich Milan samaun nu,
Jiwen tere pyaar de samundar di lehar howan.
Haan khush main tere vich sajjna,
Jiwen is lehar di hi mauj howan.
Meri khushi vich sab khush lagged,
Jiwen ehi chaldi bahaar howan.
Ki pata kall nu shayad main,
Raahan tereyan di hi manzil howan.
Rahaan tereyan di hi manzil howan

 

[jattpunjabi]

Tere warga koi hor na howe

Roop tera injh lagge ,
Jiwen koi rabbi noor howe,
Haasa tera jiwen koi,
Pyaara jeha sangeet howe.
Ankhan teriyan di chamak,
Lakhan tareyan di chamak howe.
Hasde hoye injh laggda,
Jiwen phullan di barsaat howe.
Anakh sachhe punjabiyan wargi,
Jo pyaar di har gall vich shareek howe.
Tareef teri injh karan,
Jiwen mukh chon nikalda koi geet howe,
Laggda mainu is taran k jiwen
Tere warga koi hor na howe.

 

[jattpunjabi]

Roop tera injh lagge ,
Jiwen koi rabbi noor howe,
Haasa tera jiwen koi,
Pyaara jeha sangeet howe.
Ankhan teriyan di chamak,
Lakhan tareyan di chamak howe.
Hasde hoye injh laggda,
Jiwen phullan si barsaat howe.
Anakh sachhe punjabiyan wargi,
Jo pyaar di har gall vich shareek howe.
Tareef teri injh karan,
Jiwen much chon nikalda koi geet howe,
Laggda mainu is taran k jiwen
Tere warga koi horn a howe.

 

[jattpunjabi]

Ajj chaldi hawa de hulareyan vich jhoom lainde
Tere ehsaasan nu changi taran mehsoos kar lainde
Lokan to ohle naina ton neer veh lainde
Ajj mainu tere vich hassdi vassdi jee lainde

Ik full banke mainu mehak lainde
Saareyan nu apne pyaar de pyaar vich duba lainde
Tainu yaad karke hothan te muskaan le aunde
Ajj tere vich hassdi vassdi jee lainde

Jande panchiyan naal udd jaande
Baddlan vich bijli banke lishak jaande
Ik baar tere vich puri taran saman jaande
Dhupp vich turde hoye tera parchaawan ban jaande
Ajj fer tere vich hassdi vassdi jee lainde
Ajj fer tere vich hassdi vassdi jee lainde

 

[jattpunjabi]

Ik baddal da pyaar v kinna anokha hai
Ajj ik chota jeha baddal dekheya
Jo ikalla hi asmaan vich c
Koi hor usde naal nahin c
Bas ik hi jagah te khada c
Hawa aaye te eh turan lagg peya
Shayad isnu is hawa da hi intizar c
Tan k eh hawa de sahare naal
Aapne vichde pyaar naal mil sake
Jad eh baddal apne pyaare kol jayega tan....
Hor v tez ho jaoo
Us naal milke us vich hi sama jaoo
Enna pyaar hai isnu apne pyaare naal
Jo jaande hi us vich mil jaoo
Tan apne pyaar di khushboo saari dharti de bakheru
Isde is pyaar bhare meeh(rain) vich
Lakhan karodan lokan de dilan nu khushi milu
Kya anokhe ehsaas ne
Ehna pyaar karan waleyan de
Pata nahin mainu kadon apne pyaare da saath naseeb hoyega...... pata
nahin kado?

 

[jattpunjabi]

Chann diyaaN rishmaaN ne vi
KOi thand na ditti jad
Phir tur payi haaN karan
Ibaadat teri bewafai di
____________ _________ _________ _________ _________ ____

Sochdi haan hun hatth vadha hi lavaaN
asmaan de chand taareyaan vall
je na vi mile dar taan nahin hathoN nikal jaan da

 

[Jasmeet]

Satbir ji you r realy a very good poet.
In your all poetry i like one lovesadding poem and that is:-
Chann diyaan rishmaan ne vi koi thand na ditti,
Jad tur payi haan karan ibaadat teri bewafai di.
this poem is damn good.I request to u please send some kind of love & sad Poetry.
I'm waiting for your poetry.
O.K,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Thank you so much.
I'm Jasmeet Singh

 

[Bhavneet Singh]

Bahut vadia likheya hai ji..........Bahut sohni shayari karde o ji tusi.............

 

[satbir2786]

thanku friends...

 

[Konvicted_Jatt]

bahut hee kaim poetry hai ji beeba ji dee.... keep it up.......

 

[jaggi633725]

bahut vadiya

 

[Rajat]

tfs..

 

[satbir2786]

tutte taareyaN nu wekh mangi dua changi hundi a
tutte dilaN te dasso ki muraad puri hundi a ?

madhiyaN te jake deewa baaley peer khush hunde ne
ashiquaN de seeweyaN te ki dua kabool hundi a ?

baddlaN de ron te lok khush bade hunde ne
dasso nainaN de wehan te kehdi fasal hari hundi a ?

full tahni naalon tod k gal saja hunde ne
saanu patteya nu tod k kehdi reejh puri hundi a ????

satbir kaur
.... God bless u .... hassde wassde raho

 

[Ginny]

good
tfs