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[cheetah]

cheeteh bai bahut hi khoob likhian ne dove poems.....thanks heaps for sharing......

tu aha zalam word kiss layee use keetaa....mainu ih last walian lines samaj ni ayian...jaan fer tu koi hor word use kar sakda c instead of that

ki ay keh jad mehboob chhad jai taa oh zalim hi ban janda ay asi zalim da zikar kita ay ,,,jay main saariaa nu dasan laga tey ous zalim ney badnaa ho jaana​

 

[MeHRaM]

thats a gud thought.....thanx

 

[Guest33]

gud one ji gud one....

 

[dhillon_2smart]

jo shaksh takhto taj de kabil hon main nacheej gud kis taran karan.....

 

[cheetah]

asi ais hayati day lambey pandey maar kay
asi tur chaley apna sab kuj haar key

tery navein laa daiey jind day sarey lamhey
aapey asi dub jana sajnaa tenu taar key

jundey jee koi nai puchda menu aa key
mazar bana key pojan gay ay loki menu maar key

boharr de thandi chaan taley piyaz roti chatni khayey
khou da mithaa pani peyey dovey pair pasaar key

chaalann marrda aawa ga kandhaa bohey tup kay
hik wari waikh lay sajna tahir nu waz maar key

 

[cheetah]

phool,moti,shabnam
chaand sitarey
sapney piyarey
husan jawani
piyar kahani
sab kuch hi tou
uskey paas
apney muqadar main
ik tooti si aas
ik piyasi piyaas ​

my own...

 

[cheetah]

ies koochaa main
her aahat pey
her dhadkan key saath
her dil baar baar bethy
uski khusboo
pehlee chaar soo
kiyu na her koi
pher bey qaraar bethy​

 

[dhillon_2smart]

Aaj phir khuda ne mujse pucha...., tera hasta hua chera udaas kyo haii....??? , barsti nigaho me pyaas kyo hai…? Jinki nazron me tu kuch nahiii....., who tere liye khaas kyo hai…?????

 

[cheetah]

Teri yaad aangan main oter aai
hont kapkapa gay aankh bher aai

muater hain fazain mehkein yeh hawain
teri khushboo mery ghar main oter aai

main tujh say milney ko jo betaab tha
shab bher neend na aati magar aai

umeed tooney kiyu saath chorr dia
oos say pochain gay gar idher aai

yeh dil nahee roota kabhi bhi tahir
tery ziker pey yonhi bher aai ​

 

[Niki_Grewal]

mitro tey bailyo main samjiha see key khavry tuhanu guru mukhi aaondi honi ay per meri ghalti ay ..main taa samjehia see punjabi ay per punjabi vee taa dou ho gay nay..​

bailio aa jey main likhya see aa punjabi nazmaa tey gazlann sun koi gaaliaan nai likhian main,,,,,​

tuhanu samajh nai lagi maafi mangnaN haan...​

Its Shahmukhi,,,,not Gurmukhi,,,,,u have written Punjabi in shahmukhi lippi,,,,,I know in Pakistaan you write Punjabi in Shahmukhi now. Thanks for the poems though,,,,,i just read them all today,,,,offcourse the translated ones only,,,,,they all r awesome ....keep it up

 

[dhillon_2smart]

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[cheetah]

Its Shahmukhi,,,,not Gurmukhi,,,,,u have written Punjabi in shahmukhi lippi,,,,,I know in Pakistaan you write Punjabi in Shahmukhi now. Thanks for the poems though,,,,,i just read them all today,,,,offcourse the translated ones only,,,,,they all r awesome ....keep it up

thank you jee.....​

 

[cheetah]

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ser pakad key beh giyun ki gal a gabru.....aaaaa??????

 

[cheetah]

Oncha urrney ka shuq hamain lay dooba
Yeh shiri ka zooq hamain lay dooba
Saada say loog they ishq kar bathey
Hamarey galey ka yeh Tooq hamain lay dooba

 

[cheetah]

Dil ko kachi mati ka khilona samaj kar tord detey hain

bar bar mera hath thaam kar who chorr detey hain

kahaa miley ga tujhey mujh sa khush guftaar tahir

Kitney badnaseeb hain woh khoshi ko paa kar chorr detey hain​

 

[dhillon_2smart]

dosti se khushi kam nahi hoti,dosti se jindagi kam nahi hoti,agar dosti aap jaise dost se ho,to jindagi jannat se kam nahi hoti"

 

[cheetah]

dosti se khushi kam nahi hoti,dosti se jindagi kam nahi hoti,agar dosti aap jaise dost se ho,to jindagi jannat se kam nahi hoti"

DOSTI SAY KHUSHI KAM NAHI HOTI
DOSTI SAY ZINDGI KAM NAHI HOTI>>>>>>> ( NOT THIS ONE)
DOORI SAY MUHABAT KAM NAHI HOTI
AGAR DOSTI AAP JESY DOST SAY HO
TOU AANKH KABHI NAM NAHI HOTI

GREEN IS QAFIA........PURPLE IS RADEEF
YEH AGAR IS TARHA LIKHO TOU,,,,,WAZAN,AUR QAAFIA,RADEEF
THEEK HONGEY,,,MAGAR BEHAR THEEK NAHI

ITS NOT EASY JOB TO WRITE A URDU SHAIRI......
KHIYAL ACHAA HAY.....

 

[cheetah]

dhillon_ bhrar kithy giy o.........

 

[cheetah]

kuch ishq tha kuch majboori thi so main nay jeevan haar dia
main kaisa zinda aadmi tha aik shaks nay mujko maar dia

 

[kakaji]

urdu nahi andi punjabi bollo