> ron v na ditta <

[nav-3]

yaadan ohdiya

nu main khon na ditta

ghama meriya

ne menu chup hon na ditta

akh tan meri

ajj vi bhar ayi ohdi yaad vich

par teri hasdi surat

ne menu ron v na ditta


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[Pardesan Punjaban]

awwwwwwwwwwww
how sweet

 

[nav-3]

awwwwwwwwwwww
how sweet

PP ji ,but hoe ki hunda ,thnks god u don mean dat thing

 

[Pardesan Punjaban]

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[beautiful]

its seems very painful poem but i really appreciate ur efforts.

gud job.

 

[•°¤*(¯`° (sîmrãñ) °´¯)*¤°]

tooooo gudd
.......
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[SherDil™]

par main ro pia

 

[jaggi633725]

nice.

 

[Rajat]

nice..

tfs..