pyar na hunda

[deepmisson]

jad tera deedar nai hunda,
taan din khushgwar nai hunda,
tere bina dil kyo tarhpda e,
shayad changa hunda je tere nal pyar na hunda...........

 

[3275_gill]

nyyccc nd true changa hunda j ohde nal pyar na hunda

 

[deepmisson]

thnx for ur complement ..........g
for ur beautifull lines.....

 

[$hokeen J@tt]

nice one ji

Please go through poetry rules at once

https://www.unp.me/f30/rules-poetry-section-106023/

 

[#m@nn#]

nice...