Punjab Mera Rahe Wasda...

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

no irrelavant posting, stick to the thread topic
Peace

 

[jas_sandhu]

bda vadya likhya sp veer
keep it up........

 

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

bda vadya likhya sp veer
keep it up........

all crdit to u & PP

 

[jas_sandhu]

all crdit to u & PP

nahi veer asi tahh sirf thoda jeha roop hi savariya
baki sari soch te creativity te tuhadi hai
so sara crdit tuhanu janda sirf..

 

[SherDil™]

tere laaniyaa

ik te hug karke gaya uton fer...smirk

Saun Rabb di badi der hogi main ni khadi kheer

Sari duniya rusje bhave ruse na mera SP Veer


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[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

nahi veer asi tahh sirf thoda jeha roop hi savariya
baki sari soch te creativity te tuhadi hai
so sara crdit tuhanu janda sirf..

tuhade donna ton inspire hoke te likhna shuru kitta....

 

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

lokko, this was my first try...tell me abt the good and BAD thngs in this poem, so tht i can improve my writing skills....

 

[maitybaba]

Vadiya Hai Paaji

 

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

thx maity.........

 

[Birha Tu Sultan]

hhhhhhhhhhmmmmmmm

 

[SHauKeeN GaBRu]

Thanks Pardeep

 

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