jatti_sydney said:Bahut Vadhia hai......sab sukh hai kaka kion aisian kavitava likh rihe....
Pardesan Punjaban said:good one hai g
hmmm...bhaut pyaari ji poem hai...Ramin said:tasveer osdi
enj dekh dekh ke hasdi rahi,
chalda rahuga saah mera.
terian akhan menu inj japdiya,
jiwey samunder koi bahut gehra.
chittey dand menu inj japdey,
jiwey lagya howey parian da pehra.
sada rahi zindgi ch tu meri,
door karr de sara tu hanera.
tere saah menu sahan ton vi pyaare,
tere dil ch rahu sada mera basera.
ni tu larey laa ke na javi ,
dil takda rahuga raah tera.
Ramin(01-09-06)
ah vi gud one...... ..thx foe sharing ur poems..Ramin said:apni adat ji pa ke hun muh ferdey a.
sathon door hona chaundey a .
jinni door jaungey main onna nere aunga.
bhulana chahungey par fer vi chete aunga.
lakh koshish karungey bhulaun di ,
ik sapna ban ke aunga.
sapna tor ke bhulna chaungey menu.
akhan kholan te vi main i nazar aunga.
nazra cho bhulan di koshish karungey .
main ik athru bann ke awanga.
athru punjh ke bhulana chahungey
muh te haasa bann ke awanga.
lakh koshish kar la menu bhulan di .
menu kade nahi bhul pawengi .
ramin(02/15/06)
Tehsin said:ah vi gud one...... ..thx foe sharing ur poems..
oops i missed it ...ultimate aa 22apni adat ji pa ke hun muh ferdey a.
sathon door hona chaundey a .
jinni door jaungey main onna nere aunga.
bhulana chahungey par fer vi chete aunga.
lakh koshish karungey bhulaun di ,
ik sapna ban ke aunga.
sapna tor ke bhulna chaungey menu.
akhan kholan te vi main i nazar aunga.
nazra cho bhulan di koshish karungey .
main ik athru bann ke awanga.
athru punjh ke bhulana chahungey
muh te haasa bann ke awanga.
lakh koshish kar la menu bhulan di .
menu kade nahi bhul pawengi .
ramin(02/15/06)
oops i missed it ...ultimate aa 22
wow nice one