~~poems by me~~

bhua sab kuch theek a ...kavita thinking utey depend a ..jiddan tusi sochungey odda di kavita likhungey ...baaki like karan wastey thank ju a
jatti_sydney said:
Bahut Vadhia hai......sab sukh hai kaka kion aisian kavitava likh rihe....:wink
 
Ramin said:
tasveer osdi




enj dekh dekh ke hasdi rahi,


chalda rahuga saah mera.​



terian akhan menu inj japdiya,


jiwey samunder koi bahut gehra.​



chittey dand menu inj japdey,


jiwey lagya howey parian da pehra.​



sada rahi zindgi ch tu meri,


door karr de sara tu hanera.​



tere saah menu sahan ton vi pyaare,


tere dil ch rahu sada mera basera.​



ni tu larey laa ke na javi ,


dil takda rahuga raah tera.​



Ramin(01-09-06)​
hmmm...bhaut pyaari ji poem hai...:y
 
Ramin said:
apni adat ji pa ke hun muh ferdey a.
sathon door hona chaundey a .


jinni door jaungey main onna nere aunga.
bhulana chahungey par fer vi chete aunga.


lakh koshish karungey bhulaun di ,
ik sapna ban ke aunga.


sapna tor ke bhulna chaungey menu.
akhan kholan te vi main i nazar aunga.


nazra cho bhulan di koshish karungey .
main ik athru bann ke awanga.


athru punjh ke bhulana chahungey
muh te haasa bann ke awanga.


lakh koshish kar la menu bhulan di .
menu kade nahi bhul pawengi .

ramin(02/15/06)
ah vi gud one......:y ..thx foe sharing ur poems..
 

MeHRaM

sadial
apni adat ji pa ke hun muh ferdey a.
sathon door hona chaundey a .

jinni door jaungey main onna nere aunga.
bhulana chahungey par fer vi chete aunga.

lakh koshish karungey bhulaun di ,
ik sapna ban ke aunga.

sapna tor ke bhulna chaungey menu.
akhan kholan te vi main i nazar aunga.

nazra cho bhulan di koshish karungey .
main ik athru bann ke awanga.

athru punjh ke bhulana chahungey
muh te haasa bann ke awanga.

lakh koshish kar la menu bhulan di .
menu kade nahi bhul pawengi .
ramin(02/15/06)
oops i missed it ...ultimate aa 22
 
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