Oh Rove Na Koi Aakh Dena Ja Ke Us Marjaani Nu

[lllljalandharllll]

meri Maut Ton Baad -
mera Jism Jallaa Dena,

par Mera Dil Kadd Laina -
kitey Onu Na Bhula Dena,

mainu Parwaah Nahi Ke Mera Dil Jall Jauga,

parwaah Hai Ke Us Vich Rehan Wala -
mera Bholaa Jeha Yaar Kithey Jauga,

mar Ke Vi Os Kamli Da Pyaar Meri Rooh Nu Tarsauga,

main Ambraan Vich Rounga - Te Oh Dharti Te Kurlaauga,

oh Rove Na Koi Aakh Dena Ja Ke Us Marjaani Nu,
keho Agley Janam Vich "ROMMY" Fer Gall Nal Lauga.....!

 

[J@tti]

o 22 iko ik jindagi aa.. khush rehla.. har poem sad .. otherwise well written!

 

[Niki_Grewal]

awesome ........................................u write toooooo good .

 

[jattpunjabi]

pata ni bai ne aap likian ke kise dian ne..jihdia v ne vadia ne

 

[Da Tiwana]

waah bayee jallandhar aaleyaa nzaaraa leyaan taa mittraa baahli kaim aa yaar :D
bayee main oho topi paaonda hi ni nahi taan tainu oho angrejaan aala hats off vi keh dinda :D

par jo vi hai mittra baahli kaim kavita aa mittra teri
je taan aap likhda bayee fer taan chakki chall fatte te likhi chal hor te je bayee kitto labh ke leyaonda aan taan bayee fer vi chakki chall fatte te leyayi chal aidaan diyaan hor :D

was really good buddy keep it up

 

[Benipal]

Nice poem

Hathaan diyaan lakiraan nu
Ungglaan tarsdiyaan rahiaan ney

Koi Mehndi laa key hathaan tey
taqdeer badal geya lafzaan di
Benipal

 

[Sonia_Nz]

meri Maut Ton Baad -
mera Jism Jallaa Dena,

par Mera Dil Kadd Laina -
kitey Onu Na Bhula Dena,

mainu Parwaah Nahi Ke Mera Dil Jall Jauga,

parwaah Hai Ke Us Vich Rehan Wala -
mera Bholaa Jeha Yaar Kithey Jauga,

mar Ke Vi Os Kamli Da Pyaar Meri Rooh Nu Tarsauga,

main Ambraan Vich Rounga - Te Oh Dharti Te Kurlaauga,

oh Rove Na Koi Aakh Dena Ja Ke Us Marjaani Nu,
keho Agley Janam Vich "ROMMY" Fer Gall Nal Lauga.....!

oh mah gosh ehni senti poetry teh mei kadde hi nai parriii keun rulaii jandaa ahhh khush rehhh

 

[huslta_fo_lyfe]

2 gud rommy ........i jus luv yr work veer........

keep it up ......

 

[jaggi633725]

Re: Oh Rove Na Koi Aakh Dena Ja Ke Us Ma

nice.

 

[Rajat]

Re: Oh Rove Na Koi Aakh Dena Ja Ke Us Ma

nice..

 

[.::singh chani::.]

nice tfs......