Oh kehndi c

[bapu da laadla]

jo kahenga oh karnagi oh kehndi c,
jithe khenga tere naal kharangi oh kehndi c,
tere naal main kade na larangi oh kehndi c,
jina tu pyar karenga taitho vad main karangi oh kehndi c,
sari umar tainu takdi rahangi oh kehndi c,
tera dukh main apne te jarangi oh kehndi c,
je tu mar gya ta tere naal marangi oh kehndi c,
aaj keh gyi apna mail nahi hona,
khich gyi majboori wali leek ae,
dukh ta bahut hoya,
par oh apni jagah thik ae.
Visakha singh

 

[reshmi_mutiyar]

hehehehehehehehehehehehe

 

[bapu da laadla]

hehehehehehehehehehehehe

hassde kyn ho?

 

[reshmi_mutiyar]

hassde kyn ho?

dukh ta bahut hoya,
par oh apni jagah thik ae. iss karke, ki mein sochdi c, ki tuhadi kavita de end ch tusi uss nu kuj guse wali gal kahoge------ per tusi ending funny kiti kavita di--------- oss di majboori naal sehmat hoke

 

[bapu da laadla]

dukh ta bahut hoya,
par oh apni jagah thik ae. iss karke, ki mein sochdi c, ki tuhadi kavita de end ch tusi uss nu kuj guse wali gal kahoge------ per tusi ending funny kiti kavita di--------- oss di majboori naal sehmat hoke

main ohde naal gusse nai ho sakda c es karke main end es tarah likh dita. Baki jado next kite kuch likhya ta shayed tusi samaz jaoge k main end es tarah da kyn kita.

 

[reshmi_mutiyar]

wese jo v likhia, its beautiful ---ih first kavita parri ithe unp te mein- jis ch vichree pyar da gamh nahi-- end ch judai nu accept kita gaya---------

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

good one.