~NEIL aa gya valait~

neil

W@TNO DOOR
Daddy ne kiha reh ja india kam karin koyi apna
nahin daddy main bahar hain jana pura karan ik sapna

aa kay ithay diharian keetian, har hurdle pya hai tapna
reh gayiyan sariyaan khwayishaan dub kay, choor ho gya sapna

hun yaad aande ne oh din jadon aishaan si assi luttiyaan
hun das das panne sign karne penday len layi do chhutiyaan

ihnu hi agar life ne kehnday assi nahin hai jini
kismatan futt jandiyaan inna kam karke daaru pehndi fer pini

india wapis kadon hai jana uddi assi karde wait
ki ho gya life de naal now we cant even contemplate

bahar aan da bhoot aisa hai utriyaa a gaye najar ne taare
hun pta lagga bahar aan nu bewaqufi kyon kehnde ne saare

anyway its all good keh kay kariye is poem da end
kisi nu halle wee koyi doubt hai tey saanu email kariya je send​
:mean :mean :mean :nerv :nerv :saw :saw
 

full_taur

Member
Balle Neil bai.. yaar tu vi.. shayari kran lag peya... yaar khich ta kamm tu vi.. chal good bai... BUt yaar few things after reading ur poem..

1. Like me, u r also depserate to go back to India... and waiting for time when you will be able to go back to india...

2. Like me, Tainu vi apne desh de te apne punjab di importance pata laggi... and now u miss punjab & ur home and uh galiyan jithe ghumde see..

3. LIke me, y ou also think at times.. ki sala kyu agya mein valiet... (as we dnt have any problems whatsoever in India, too)

Bai no offences... vaise hi mainun laga te saying it...

But BAi jo marji keh le... PUnjab dee koi Rees nai.. sala haje vi uthe jake mann jeha lagda hai.. and feels like aaho yaar yeh apni dharti hai...what say Bai..
 

GeNie_iN_a_boTtLe

~~brOwn sUg@~~
kyaa baat hai aa te shero shayeri v karda....main te socheya c enu sirf peena hi aunda:wink :wink .....badi wadiya poem likhi aa........vry true shrue.....:dr :dr :dr
 

neil

W@TNO DOOR
HMM
TRUE AA EH..
HOR KEE HUNDA...JO JO MERE NAAL HUNDA GIYA, MAIN LIKHI GIYA,

and still main INTERNATIONAL STUDENTS de life te koi chanan nee paya,

oh ve ek alag ee experience aa,

:wink

GeNie_iN_a_boTtLe said:
kyaa baat hai aa te shero shayeri v karda....main te socheya c enu sirf peena hi aunda:wink :wink .....badi wadiya poem likhi aa........vry true shrue.....:dr :dr :dr
 

GeNie_iN_a_boTtLe

~~brOwn sUg@~~
neil said:
HMM
TRUE AA EH..
HOR KEE HUNDA...JO JO MERE NAAL HUNDA GIYA, MAIN LIKHI GIYA,

and still main INTERNATIONAL STUDENTS de life te koi chanan nee paya,

oh ve ek alag ee experience aa,

:wink
bilkul internaional students di life taan add hi hundi aa...........chalo fer hun ode baare v likh dao kuch........
 

Zailldaar

Mimber
neil said:
Daddy ne kiha reh ja india kam karin koyi apna
nahin daddy main bahar hain jana pura karan ik sapna

aa kay ithay diharian keetian, har hurdle pya hai tapna
reh gayiyan sariyaan khwayishaan dub kay, choor ho gya sapna

hun yaad aande ne oh din jadon aishaan si assi luttiyaan
hun das das panne sign karne penday len layi do chhutiyaan

ihnu hi agar life ne kehnday assi nahin hai jini
kismatan futt jandiyaan inna kam karke daaru pehndi fer pini

india wapis kadon hai jana uddi assi karde wait
ki ho gya life de naal now we cant even contemplate

bahar aan da bhoot aisa hai utriyaa a gaye najar ne taare
hun pta lagga bahar aan nu bewaqufi kyon kehnde ne saare

anyway its all good keh kay kariye is poem da end
kisi nu halle wee koyi doubt hai tey saanu email kariya je send​
:mean :mean :mean :nerv :nerv :saw :saw

gUd oNe bAi...sAdkE terE
 

neil

W@TNO DOOR
p.s. I am cuttin down on my drinking.

GeNie_iN_a_boTtLe said:
kyaa baat hai aa te shero shayeri v karda....main te socheya c enu sirf peena hi aunda:wink :wink .....badi wadiya poem likhi aa........vry true shrue.....:dr :dr :dr
 

Pardesan Punjaban

Alone but Happy
neil said:
Daddy ne kiha reh ja india kam karin koyi apna​

nahin daddy main bahar hain jana pura karan ik sapna

aa kay ithay diharian keetian, har hurdle pya hai tapna
reh gayiyan sariyaan khwayishaan dub kay, choor ho gya sapna

hun yaad aande ne oh din jadon aishaan si assi luttiyaan
hun das das panne sign karne penday len layi do chhutiyaan

ihnu hi agar life ne kehnday assi nahin hai jini
kismatan futt jandiyaan inna kam karke daaru pehndi fer pini

india wapis kadon hai jana uddi assi karde wait
ki ho gya life de naal now we cant even contemplate

bahar aan da bhoot aisa hai utriyaa a gaye najar ne taare
hun pta lagga bahar aan nu bewaqufi kyon kehnde ne saare

anyway its all good keh kay kariye is poem da end
kisi nu halle wee koyi doubt hai tey saanu email kariya je send
:mean :mean :mean :nerv :nerv :saw :saw

That is so true.....................bahut theek likhia
 

Guest33

Elite
wah oye neele....yaar aah taan bahli sahi gal kahi hai.....main ajj hi jaan nu tiyar haan fer sochi haan 5 saal gaal laye kion sukki hi mud java ik hor option leke ji jaungi......yaar ik mithi jail ih taan......

hun ik international student te vilikh hi deo kuch..........main taan ihi keh sakdi haan ki ik INternational Student di zindagi vi ki zindagi hai....:n :n :n main taan zindagi toon hatash aayi pai haan........
 

MeHRaM

sadial
neil said:
Daddy ne kiha reh ja india kam karin koyi apna​

nahin daddy main bahar hain jana pura karan ik sapna

aa kay ithay diharian keetian, har hurdle pya hai tapna
reh gayiyan sariyaan khwayishaan dub kay, choor ho gya sapna

hun yaad aande ne oh din jadon aishaan si assi luttiyaan
hun das das panne sign karne penday len layi do chhutiyaan

ihnu hi agar life ne kehnday assi nahin hai jini
kismatan futt jandiyaan inna kam karke daaru pehndi fer pini

india wapis kadon hai jana uddi assi karde wait
ki ho gya life de naal now we cant even contemplate

bahar aan da bhoot aisa hai utriyaa a gaye najar ne taare
hun pta lagga bahar aan nu bewaqufi kyon kehnde ne saare

anyway its all good keh kay kariye is poem da end
kisi nu halle wee koyi doubt hai tey saanu email kariya je send
:mean :mean :mean :nerv :nerv :saw :saw
sahi gall aa 22 g... fuss ge yaar... ikk kumm chhdao dooja tayar hunda... dooja chhado teeja te aine nu pehle de fer vaari aa jandi aa.. neend v poori ni hundi..buses ch hi neend poori kareedi aa.... te dooje passe apne punjab ch eh haal si v jado takk sare ghar de jor la ke hatt ni jande si appaa uthida ni si hunda... saun de nit nave records bnaeede hunde si.. changa v daata...
 

Guest33

Elite
sydneysider said:
sahi gall aa 22 g... fuss ge yaar... ikk kumm chhdao dooja tayar hunda... dooja chhado teeja te aine nu pehle de fer vaari aa jandi aa.. neend v poori ni hundi..buses ch hi neend poori kareedi aa.... te dooje passe apne punjab ch eh haal si v jado takk sare ghar de jor la ke hatt ni jande si appaa uthida ni si hunda... saun de nit nave records bnaeede hunde si.. changa v daata...
aah tuhadi bussa ch neend poori karan wali gal naal main bilkul sehmat haan....meri taan train bus ch behnde hi akh lagg jandi......bhaven central ti wynyard hi kion na hove. ghar taan mainu ik hotel hi lagda.......bas tiyar shiyar hoye...time laggia roti pani kha lia nahi oh vi raste ch hi .........bahli zindagi fikki ji hai.....inida sab kuch kar laida si fer vi kinna time hunda si...ithe taan hafte ch 10 din vi hon taan vi lagge time ghat hai.....
 

Angel_Eyes

Done Deal !
jatti_sydney said:
aah tuhadi bussa ch neend poori karan wali gal naal main bilkul sehmat haan....meri taan train bus ch behnde hi akh lagg jandi......bhaven central ti wynyard hi kion na hove. ghar taan mainu ik hotel hi lagda.......bas tiyar shiyar hoye...time laggia roti pani kha lia nahi oh vi raste ch hi .........bahli zindagi fikki ji hai.....inida sab kuch kar laida si fer vi kinna time hunda si...ithe taan hafte ch 10 din vi hon taan vi lagge time ghat hai.....
Vakai gal bilkul sachi hai, aah bahr de chakkra ch insaan fas janda hai, Har bande de apne apne circumstances ban jaande ne, te eh mithi jail cho nikaleya nahi jaanda
 
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