My Poems..!

Sandhu

Sandhu Jatt
really nice. jattiye ur expression power in english in the form of poems really bada changa hai. sanu anpadan nu ve maddi motti sikhde angreji, aasi ve panga la laiye angreji na kaddi. ek gal te kahni pave gi teri poems bare tu akhran nu parondi aa te oh poem ban jandi aa. good work.
 

J@tti

..Majajan..
Kinare tak pujjan tun pehla
jida lehran jandian ne tutt
Wekh jindagi de dukh
jawin na tun kidre sadde tun chutt

Haneri rattan di ummar
hundi aee bas kujh chirr
Kisde rokya rukya channa
din te chadd hi aauna e ferr


Pendde ne jindagi ch
kujj dukh wi jarrne
Kadde na kadde ta
fer mudd aunna bharan ne


Reejan jo hundian ne
aaj sapnyan ch purrian
Rabb di rehmat nal
kadde ta durr hongian eh durrian..
 

Niki_Grewal

!*~PrInCe$$~*!
niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....... history is repeating itself,,,,lols,,,,can identify this phase very easliy,,,,all the best to both of you:)
 

Niki_Grewal

!*~PrInCe$$~*!
lols.....har Ishq ithyaas de kuchh panne dohraunda,,,,,raab kere tuhade case se sirf golden history repeat hove,,,,black na...ameen!!!!!!!:hug
 

J@tti

..Majajan..
Niki_Grewal said:
lols.....har Ishq ithyaas de kuchh panne dohraunda,,,,,raab kere tuhade case se sirf golden history repeat hove,,,,black na...ameen!!!!!!!:hug

that was so sweet of you, I 'm sure things will turn out to be the best for you, all the very best :hug
 

J@tti

..Majajan..
Terean khayalan ch gwache
Najane kadiyan kinnian ku rattan
Tera rahh takkde
Langhiyaan kaii barsatan

Aaundi rahi tere yaad har pal
Tenu uddekdyan gujjre pta ni kini ku kal
Ho janda ehja hal tere ch gwachya
Ke appna aap na jawe pachanya

Jad da hoya tere nal pyaar
Ik pal wi aya na dil nu karar
Rojj bnauna koi bhana
Changa ni kisse nu eyun tadpauna..
 

J@tti

..Majajan..
Through his wrinkled eyes, the anxiety of a young blood was evident and striking. Years had gone by but the distinguishable wait in his eyes never faded. If you take away the contractions from his skin, turn around the time, you will see a young guy with a curious look in his eyes sitting on a bench, glancing at a pathway perpetually. He possessed an attractive and charming face. During this hour of the day, the mere look in his eye could capture any on-goers attention for a couple of minutes. It had the charisma of making anyone wonder what his eyes were so diligently seeking for.

No words can do justice to the bliss that covered his face every time he saw the girl, whom he loved with his entire being. I can only wonder if he ever had to give words to his feelings, which manifested themselves so clearly in every expression on his face. Every day, she walks down the aisle and sits down next to him. They then chat for hours, smiling, sharing, and listening. Their joy was apparent to anyone and their love for each other needed no confirmation.

Today, like everyday since past twenty years, he was sitting on the bench wearing the same curious look waiting for the love of his life. They had been married for fifteen years now, but their trip to the park was never shadowed by the growth in their personal lives. He still would come half an hour before their decided tryst because he loved waiting for her, and the passing years did not have the potential to take away or diminish his affection for her. Her footsteps today brought the same delight to his face, like they did years before. And again they sat there for hours chatting, sharing, loving and left only to return the next day.
 

Sonia_Nz

>>>>MaHiYa<<<<
J@tti said:
Terean khayalan ch gwache
Najane kadiyan kinnian ku rattan
Tera rahh takkde
Langhiyaan kaii barsatan

Aaundi rahi tere yaad har pal
Tenu uddekdyan gujjre pta ni kini ku kal
Ho janda ehja hal tere ch gwachya
Ke appna aap na jawe pachanya

Jad da hoya tere nal pyaar
Ik pal wi aya na dil nu karar
Rojj bnauna koi bhana
Changa ni kisse nu eyun tadpauna..

haye haye mei marr javaaan khandh mishrii khaaa keee jattiyeee ahh poem yaar itssss tooo good yaar......
i dun hve words to desc it....its jus awesum
 
J@tti said:
Kinare tak pujjan tun pehla
jida lehran jandian ne tutt
Wekh jindagi de dukh
jawin na tun kidre sadde tun chutt

Haneri rattan di ummar
hundi aee bas kujh chirr
Kisde rokya rukya channa
din te chadd hi aauna e ferr


Pendde ne jindagi ch
kujj dukh wi jarrne
Kadde na kadde ta
fer mudd aunna bharan ne


Reejan jo hundian ne
aaj sapnyan ch purrian
Rabb di rehmat nal
kadde ta durr hongian eh durrian..

Just wanna say---"ur poems touched my heart"...
 
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