Kudiyan bewaffa nai hundiya...

*nAkHrO*

JaTTi NaKhRiYa PaTTi....
Kudiya nu bewaffa na kaho mundiyo,
oh phela hi majboriya diya mariya hundiya aa,
ek fikar hunda babul de pagg da,
duja samaaj diya jumedariya hundiya aa,
os nu bewaffa kehn tu phela socho,
tusi kine waffa nibahi aa,
karke badnaam os nu kine khushi,
os de palle paye aa,
puchde hai GAIVAN ohna mundiya tu,
je har kudi ne nhi ta,
har munde ne kehda waffa nibahi hai..........

Written by...Gaivan Sandhu(kamlo)
 

kanjjar

Banned
Kudiya nu bewaffa na kaho mundiyo,
oh phela hi majboriya diya mariya hundiya aa,
ek fikar hunda babul de pagg da,
duja samaaj diya jumedariya hundiya aa,
os nu bewaffa kehn tu phela socho,
tusi kine waffa nibahi aa,
karke badnaam os nu kine khushi,
os de palle paye aa,
puchde hai GAIVAN ohna mundiya tu,
je har kudi ne nhi ta,
har munde ne kehda waffa nibahi hai..........

Written by...Gaivan Sandhu(kamlo)
I wrote this few days ago...
Sab puchde ne naam ohda Jine mout di saza menu paayi si
Meri mohobbat Mere pyaar badle Jine ditti mainu judai si
Yaaro je enni hi zidd karde ho tan main dass dinna
Ohda pind mohobbat te ohda naam bewafai si.
But now i am speechless....... I guess i have to chew my own words.
But very well written. keep it up:wah
 

*nAkHrO*

JaTTi NaKhRiYa PaTTi....
I wrote this few days ago...
Sab puchde ne naam ohda Jine mout di saza menu paayi si
Meri mohobbat Mere pyaar badle Jine ditti mainu judai si
Yaaro je enni hi zidd karde ho tan main dass dinna
Ohda pind mohobbat te ohda naam bewafai si.
But now i am speechless....... I guess i have to chew my own words.
But very well written. keep it up:wah

Tuc nice likhiya..but tuc kade eh janan di khosish kiti k jehnu tuc ohdi bewaffai keh rehe ho..oh ohdi majboori v ho sakdi aa??:)

Thanx alot :)
 

JUGGY D

BACK TO BASIC
ਇਹ ਪੋਸਟ ਮੈਂ ਪਹਲਾ ਵੀ ਕਿਸੇ ਸਾਇਡ ਤੇ ਪੜਿਆ ਹੈ !!
ਜਿਥੋ ਤਕ ਮੇਨੂ ਚੇਤਾ ਇਸ ਦਾ ਰਚਨਕਾਰ ਕੋਈ ਹੋਰ ਹੈ !!
ਪਰ ਮੈਨੂ ਪੂਰਾ ਯਾਦ ਨਹੀ ਆ ਰਿਹਾ !!:du

ਸੈਦ ਇਸ ਤਰਾ ਕੋਈ ਸਤਰਾ ਸਨ....

"
puchde hai "NIJJAR " ohna mundiya tO,
je har kudi ne nhi ta,
har munde ne kehda waffa nibahi hai…………….
"
 

*nAkHrO*

JaTTi NaKhRiYa PaTTi....
ਇਹ ਪੋਸਟ ਮੈਂ ਪਹਲਾ ਵੀ ਕਿਸੇ ਸਾਇਡ ਤੇ ਪੜਿਆ ਹੈ !!
ਜਿਥੋ ਤਕ ਮੇਨੂ ਚੇਤਾ ਇਸ ਦਾ ਰਚਨਕਾਰ ਕੋਈ ਹੋਰ ਹੈ !!
ਪਰ ਮੈਨੂ ਪੂਰਾ ਯਾਦ ਨਹੀ ਆ ਰਿਹਾ !!:du

ਸੈਦ ਇਸ ਤਰਾ ਕੋਈ ਸਤਰਾ ਸਨ....

"
puchde hai "NIJJAR " ohna mundiya tO,
je har kudi ne nhi ta,
har munde ne kehda waffa nibahi hai…………….
"

:o :o :o
but eh poetry mein likhi aa.....mein eh ik hor site te post kiti hai...
maybe ohna ne otho copy paste kiti howe.....:)
par kese di poetry te aapna name nai likhna chaida....:(
 

JUGGY D

BACK TO BASIC
:o :o :o
but eh poetry mein likhi aa.....mein eh ik hor site te post kiti hai...
Maybe ohna ne otho copy paste kiti howe.....:)
par kese di poetry te aapna name nai likhna chaida....:(

ਕਦੋ ਲਿਖੀ ??
ਕੋਈ ਡੇਟ ਯਾਦ ??
 

kanjjar

Banned
Tuc nice likhiya..but tuc kade eh janan di khosish kiti k jehnu tuc ohdi bewaffai keh rehe ho..oh ohdi majboori v ho sakdi aa??:)

Thanx alot :)

Socheya hai ji. Par ki tusin ve kade sochea hai ke jad vi bijli lashkdi hai O shayad hi kise te digg di hai par bechara baddal ta har vaar cheereya(cut) janda hai.
 

$hokeen J@tt

Prime VIP
very nice nakhro ji......
sachi eh padan to baad kafi loka di soch badal jayegi..
even me v ohna wicho hi ha te aj kuch hor soch reha ha........
thanx alot ji........
 
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