Kis Vasteh

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[Gobind Sharma]

bahut khoob jnab..tfs

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

nice,
A request - please go through poetry rules once.

 

[#m@nn#]

harpreet ji eh tusi likhya.. i have doubt .. i read it somewhr b4

 

[jaggu singh]

sohna likhya jiii

 

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Hanji Veer Ji Waqat Uppar Bohot Lokh Likhde Ne. I am sure Kissi Nal Thora Bohot Resamble Karda Hona