"JB" Bharun hattya hi changi si...

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

Sorry dhiye tere against likhan lagga,,, par mein eh roz apni akhin dekhda haan,, maa peo nu rounde, kurlaonde wekhda haan.... te apne jazbaatan nu rok nhi paya.... maaf kari dhiye....

 

[Balrattan]

Great Words...............

 

[Gill 22]

 

[<~Man_Maan~>]

 

[*Sippu*]

kudiya toh zyada boys ghardeya nu tang karde ..
ohna nu kyun nahi maarde gharde ???

sari izaat di gal kudiya te he ah ke he kyun mukk jandi
mundeya bare likhan lageya kyun har kise di kalam tut jandi ?...to be continued*

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

kade court ch jaa k maa peo rounde wekhyo... ohna da dard samjh k wekhyo kde

baaki as suggested by SIPPU -- topic noted,, es utte wi jald hi kujh pesh karanga

 

[userid97899]

wadia likhya

 

[ᎶuᏒᎥ jᎪsᎳᎪᏞ]

nice JB

 

[#m@nn#]

bilkul sahi likhya JB......

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

bai mainu aadat hai samaaj naal thoda ladai karn di.. .. enjh sakoon nhi milda mainu te meri kalam nu,,,,, hawawan naal wehna wi ki jeena,,, maza aaonda hawa de ulat challan ch

gall bhaawein kaudi hai,, par hai sachi

 

[Rag kalwan]

bahot wadia wording c,,,, but ikaale kudia da dosh ni jar apa hi ta comel karde ohna nu,,,

wase nice words....

 

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Bhaout Qaim

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

bahot wadia wording c,,,, but ikaale kudia da dosh ni jar apa hi ta comel karde ohna nu,,,

wase nice words....

bahut jald "Napaid Puttan" te wi kujh pesh kru

 

[Black Cat]

boht wdia likheya ji ... Hmm gall bilkul shi aa... Munde v boht tang krde ne maapeya nu, but lahnta ne Ohna dhiyan Putta te, jo pyaar krke apne maapeya nu shadd dinde ne, jehna ne ohna nu inna paaleya poseya te ohna nu avde paira te khda kita, te end ch o apne ona rabb vrgeya maapeya di prawah na krde hoye, ona de sache suche pyaar nu thukra k, roundeya kurloundeya nu shad jande ne... I agree with JB, maapeya da dil boht komal hunda, Hmm ik var ta mna krde aa, kyonki ona nu prawah hundi k kite sadi dhi putt ne galat insaan ta nai chun leya... but baad ch o mann jande ne sirf avde bache di khushi lyi... baki mundeya da sarr janda, but dhee di ijjat te laggeya daag kde ni mitda, duniya na ohnu jeen dindi na usde ghrdea nu... tahi ta maape darde ne...

So boht maadi gall aa k ajjkall idda de halaat ho gye ne, e sade lyi boht shrm di gall hai...