....Isq .......

[smilly]

Tanhayiaan vich dardaan di mehfil saja lainda haan........
Pher Raat de hanereyaa ch, ja bainda haan..
Us ton rosva vi haan , Te taqdeer ton naaraz vi ......
Betey vele nu bhul ,Us di tasveer Dil naal la lainda haan.....


Us ne nahi auna , mainu pata vi ae.....
Pher vi dil vich usde aaun di, jhothi umeed jaga lainda haan..
Enna Yaadan ton door kithe chala javaan..
Jinah yaadaan ch ,dil nu jala lainda haan...

Isq de dard bade , Aukhe ne mitro.....
Aaj vi Hanjuaan nu hi ,dardaan di dava bana lainda haan...
Har aun jaan vale hawa de jhonke vich..
Khusboo mehboob di hi ,sada lainda haan....

Isq ne rolayaa ,'jas' nu vaang fakeeraan..
Pher vi isq hi khuda hai, Eh kehdaan rehenda haan...
Khud mar-mar ke jinda haan us di bewafayi ch ..
Pher vi usnu khusiyaan di, dua denda haan .........

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[sunny240]

Tanhayiaan vich dardaan di mehfil saja lainda haan........
Pher Raat de hanereyaa ch, ja bainda haan..
Us ton rosva vi haan , Te taqdeer ton naaraz vi ......
Betey vele nu bhul ,Us di tasveer Dil naal la lainda haan.....


Us ne nahi auna , mainu pata vi ae.....
Pher vi dil vich usde aaun di, jhothi umeed jaga lainda haan..
Enna Yaadan ton door kithe chala javaan..
Jinah yaadaan ch ,dil nu jala lainda haan...

Isq de dard bade , Aukhe ne mitro.....
Aaj vi Hanjuaan nu hi ,dardaan di dava bana lainda haan...
Har aun jaan vale hawa de jhonke vich..
Khusboo mehboob di hi ,sada lainda haan....

Isq ne rolayaa ,'jas' nu vaang fakeeraan..
Pher vi isq hi khuda hai, Eh kehdaan rehenda haan...
Khud mar-mar ke jinda haan us di bewafayi ch ..
Pher vi usnu khusiyaan di, dua denda haan .........

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Us ne nahi auna , mainu pata vi ae.....
Pher vi dil vich usde aaun di, jhothi umeed jaga lainda haan..
bhaut hi wadyiea veer.......as always......

 

[kudi_patole_wargi]

aini sohni poetry mainu v likhnni sikha do....bahut sohna likheya aa...but ik gal hor kaha gi puraiya yaadan nu jina dil ch rakho ge una hi thonu aukha karan giya...so let it burn

 

[V € € R]

agree wid hr............. poem is sooo nice

 

[smilly]

Us ne nahi auna , mainu pata vi ae.....
Pher vi dil vich usde aaun di, jhothi umeed jaga lainda haan..
bhaut hi wadyiea veer.......as always......

thanx dear.......

 

[smilly]

aini sohni poetry mainu v likhnni sikha do....bahut sohna likheya aa...but ik gal hor kaha gi puraiya yaadan nu jina dil ch rakho ge una hi thonu aukha karan giya...so let it burn

Thanx bhabo ji .... Main taan aap aje sikh rehaa haan. Main ki thavanu sikha sakda haan. Bas enna hi keh sakda haan ki jo vi dil vich aunda hai us nu likh davo.. Sub ton pehalaan chand lines 22 ji layi try karo... Vekheyo aape aa jana shayari karana....

Bhabo ji kaas ke yaadan jal jandiyaa.....

Kaas ke yaadan jal jandiyaan, te eh veerane na honde.....
Kade vi sad song na bande te, te dardaan bhare tarane na hunde...

 

[smilly]

agree wid hr............. poem is sooo nice

thanx dear...........

Isq de rog avle......

 

[SehaJ]

Always brilliant stuff!

 

[Preeto]

wow bohat sohna likhiya bhaji!! thanks a lot share karan layi sade naal

 

[smilly]

Always brilliant stuff!

thanx ............ Veer

 

[smilly]

wow bohat sohna likhiya bhaji!! thanks a lot share karan layi sade naal

thanx bhabo ji.....

 

[Preeto]

thanx bhabo ji.....

ur welcome ji

 

[jaggi633725]

nice.

 

[Rajat]

nice..