Dobara jeon di aas

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

mein sochyaa romantic likhan di shuruwaat wi kar laiye hun

 

[$hokeen J@tt]

So gud ustaad g

 

[Chann]

 

[tomarnidhi]

very well written . oh gall vakhri hai ki menu adhi palle nai padi

 

[*kinnu*]

att

 

[Arun Bhardwaj]

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

very well written . oh gall vakhri hai ki menu adhi palle nai padi

ki palle nhi pya dasso , i will explain..

waise meri aksar koshish hundi hai ki mein simple words use kra, tan jo sab nu samjh aa j ,,,, j eh samjh nhi aayi,, pher eh tan bilkul wi ni palle ni paini tuhanu

 

[Arun Bhardwaj]

^^ eh chiz mere palle nhi pai, Jb kehna ki chahunda hai..

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

^^ eh chiz mere palle nhi pai, Jb kehna ki chahunda hai..

j ehnu samjhna veer, Shiv Kumar Batalvi ji di rachnawa padhyaa kro,,, ohna de naksh-e-kadam te challan di koshish kitti hai choti jihi

 

[Gill 22]

Sirrrraaaaaa jb veer

 

[Arun Bhardwaj]

ki palle nhi pya dasso , i will explain..

waise meri aksar koshish hundi hai ki mein simple words use kra, tan jo sab nu samjh aa j ,,,, j eh samjh nhi aayi,, pher eh tan bilkul wi ni palle ni paini tuhanu


main tn is line di gal kr riha c, pic tn mainu pehla show hi nhi kiti c..

waise tn mainu smjh laggi sari but
ek do chizan ne jo smjh nhi aiya

main oh krsan sari luna

nd safde da full (safde nu full v lagda hai )

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

Loona nu samjhan lyi,, Shiv di likhi loona padhyo
yes safede nu chote chote full laggde hain,, jihna nu kise de hath naseeb nhi hunde,, bas hawa naal jhad de ne

 

[Arun Bhardwaj]

ok, karsan da ki meaning hai

 

[Jaswinder Singh Baidwan]

oh karsan nhi, karman hai,, typo error namanu

 

[Arun Bhardwaj]

fer oh sari v nhi hona oh mari hona..

 

[Gurjinder Baidwan]

 

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